Touch of gold come on man you really need some help yo ur whole verse was played i mean u can do better than that and all the spaces in ur verse why that made me say fuck this verse its shit in structure and punchlines and and personals i realy think u bit from someone that was weak lmao
Code You had a ok verse here u can improve some like when you try to use personals try making it a lil bit more better you know but one more thing work on ur punches some was weak and i wasn't feeling them.
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