ak mixa vs. vane

Ak- u had a good verse mayne. I liked the flow, easily red, and the structure and punches were all good as well. Both verses were actually pretty good. U came better with the personals and u had more of them.

vane- good verse as well. U had a well structured verse. I like the flow as well. every thing else was either average or alittle below. U didnt have it in this battle this time. Lines seemed alittle stretch. Its weird, Ak looks like he had some long ass lines, but they didnt sound stretch, on the other hand urs did, and ur lines were shorter, but wutever. had to agree with everybody

Vote-AK

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122858

yah i agree, ak did come better

xplinations
vane- u had a good verse, i dunnno y but i swear the eskimo thing is played to me for some reason,neway, you had good punches andyou flow was good too
simple vocab even tho the battles are based on punches n metas. nice metas

ak- you basrely came ahaedn in this, almost every line was a meta, and they fit well together too, good punches, a little over with vocab, a little, but i think battles are based on punches as i sed,
flow was consistent, lines matched up perfectly almost

nice battle to the both of you tho

peace

shit, did i put a poll vote in the wrong one, haha wow imma dumbass, i admit it, if i did, can a mod change that to ak's side thanx


Fixed.-ILLunatic

This battle was aigt, but...

ak-mixa: I liked your metas, first off. Some of them didn't hit hard enough, however. Besides that, work on ur structure and don't stretch ur bars like I used to do. Better structure=better flow, usually. Keep elevatin'.

vane: U had a strong effort and better structure. Besides that, ur punches didn't hit harder and you weren't creative enough. But keep up the effort and check out ur opponents profile and previous battles for good personals. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: ak mixa

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My Assessment

ak-mixa: decent spit i felt you were laying it out like a templete as if punch,personal,meta,punch.personal etc. not trying to blend it in properly with a meta punch or personals with wordplay but anyway still decent for wat you had it was good keep at it and youll elevate fast.

vane: man you had a few goodies but then you kinda lost me plus dunt put explanations for your punches if ppl dunt get em then its not worth writeing so dunt explain unless its pronounciation thats different overall flow , structure were aight just work on personals and punches.

Overall: both were just below average not wack but still nothing special was produced but both need to keep at this and elevation will come easily.

My VOTE: ak-mixa

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id say ak got it but her shit was long as bars
other cat seemed to lack a lot of shit that ak
seemed to bring more of like better punches
and good vocab so blah vote/ak mixa for hitting
harder and man fix yur struc and both elavate
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punches goes to ak mixa i felt they landed better and worked
more effectivly as for vane had weak punches and needs to work on em

personals id say also this goes to ak mixa i felt he got him person
wise on a more direct level, as for vane attempted but didnt connect well

wordplay both had ok wordplay slightly in favor of ak mixa but ak mixa
had fucked up struc which his flow could of beem much better in a sense

structure id say this goes to vane eventhough his struc didnt help
much with his flow but it was better in a sense of mind, work on struc though

multis both were tie on this but ak mixas multis were a little more understandable as for vane sorta lost track of the battle at hand so it effected

injoyment didnt really like neither but ak mixas was more injoyable and
overall nice battle but ak mixa won this due to punches, personals and flow

vote/ak mixa

vote on my battles

whats the score? this guy above dont even know what wordplay is... nice battle anyway whatever the score is

damn no edit, and somebody at he top odf this pafe just c&p a vote....

Good battle in alll...I liked each persons for different reasons though. Vane took tha punches on this one but mixa used better Creativity which keeps me interested..Both coulda took this one but I think Mixa has it because his was easier to read and kept me in depth morre.. V/a Mixa

This was an OK Battle...

Ak came with a lot of multis but his punches were mediocre. He lacked in personals and his stretched lines made it hard for his verse to flow. If you shorten your lines and concentrate more on punches than multi's, you might get a better reaction from voters.

Vane had a few good punches but nothing special. He didn't have that many personals and the ones he had weren't that good. His verse flowed ok but a few spots were off a little. His wordplay was OK but I think this is where he was the strongest. You were pretty good in this battle, I just think it would have been a little better if you connected with a few personals......

Vote - Vane

Ak you came in with solid structure. Your flow was pretty hype but you fell off sometimes because you dragged it on, couple of lines. . .You have good delivery. You had good punches that were delivering well. Personals were there but weren't hitting as hard as the punches. Vocab was good. Creativity was decent too. Good verse!

Vane you were pretty dope aswell. You had tight metas and pretty hype similies too! Your flow was crisp. The verse was structured well. Only thing I noticed was that your personals weren't really present. What the deal? You had good multis and your wordplay stood out! Diction was alright. Truthfully I liked the 1st half of it better, but all in all a tight verse!


Props 2 both good battle

Vote - Vane

Grimey battle

ok ak mixa got this...

he had better punches as well as some ok personals, while vane focused n wordplay and his punches didnt hit him. Flow was good from both but structure goes to vane. But battles arent won by structure , they are won by punches. AK beat him in punches and thats why he won thsi batttle...goo job thoiugh

v/ak

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