A Point Of View; Im An RB Member

uhh....basically....this is some dope shit..belongs in legends...

u portrayed ever single member to the exactness..even
though i've only been able to experience a couple....the rest
i watch........and its all true...

Front line-

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Originally Posted by Smoka

Wow, this site is so large....there's no way i can gain respect
200 posts? Man i won't even try to bother against this vet

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^lol....200 posts...thats real...

damnit..ima stop quoting....there is too much shit to quote..

elevate- d/r and friend vote...yup....nicely done with this dude..

others i've only peeped from afar....and they seem exact...
until im one i'll probably fully understand it...chea...

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Originally Posted by Smoka

FuE-xIoN...letting me know that even if we are the same..for some reason you are better than me

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one of the dopest shits ive ever read.......not just cuz
i rep ijl....its that dope..
that fuxion shit is real as fuck too.....:(..sorry ..cuz i thought
fuxion was better than smoka as well....anyway..

fat legends nominee....peace..

For your first Open Mic - This was dope. If you were someone that had been doing this for awhile...this would be average, nothing special.

Not to bring you down...you have a lot of potential to get damn good at Open Mic's.

What I liked: It was true. pretty much everything you stated was fact. The Vet verse made me feel half ashamed. The announcer was a very cool touch. Woulda been cooler if you called him Conscience :) Also, I loved the topic. I had no clue you were writing this, but I would have liked to have collabed with you on this. i've never seen anyone post an Open Mic like this...not to say it hasn't been done, but I've never seen one...and I'm a grandpa to net rap sites. You kept it at a decent flow in most parts.

Dislikes: Your flow was choppy here and there though. Not only that, but you had a bit too much redundency. Vocab could've been up'd slightly and you could have put a lot more content into your piece. There were a lot of things you didn't hit on that could have been addressed in this Open Mic Piece.

Like I said though, this was your first one. For your first one, very good shit. Keep working on it. Try to integrate more multi's...that's my main problem too. Overall though, it was cool and I liked it a lot. Nice shit Smoka, keep it up.

coo....appreciate the replies...^wait till they see the collab. we will do^ ;)

peace

hey hey hey smoka.. open mic???? wtf?? wait that shit is ill.. props to you.. not only are you good at battleing.. your good at just plain rapping i give you props on this really this is good

i liked the breakdown through all of the different membersit gave me the vision of all the members.. of course i dont know what its like to be a vet and its cool to see what they feel and how the rest of rb would feel about this grrrreat piece man keep it up really!

i'am kinda shocked by Diverse's reply...lol.....dude said it was his favorite read in along time.....thanks for the replies...

uppin...

lol i liked this a lot. plus it was a nice
and original topic. I thought it was
well thought out and it flowed pretty
well and it made me laugh cuz i noticed
a lot of that shit was true. It mighta
been lacking vocab but i feel that your
flow made up for it and this was a
an excellent first piece. Lol Keep this
shit up and you`ll be a dope topical
head...

(p.s. KoN 2 smoka 0) lol i`m j/k
but on the real keep up the good
work.

Dopeness. Every word was truth in motion, each perspective was illustrated perfectly. Nothing more to say on this one, you nailed it. Word.

I know this is his first drop , but that’s the more of
A reason to put this in legends!! A lot of individuals
Already admitted tat this was nothing but truth the
topic was great.

Just my opinion though…

Should be in legends because it was on point with the
Personality break down on this and every other site.

Peace.. Oh yes this is if they haven’t already mention
It for legends…

Wow....This was really nice...And for the most part it was true...I remember when I first came here still....Realist helped me out a lot back when I started, brings back memories haha, good times...anyway...I really enjoyed this piece....I liked how you went into each part of the elevation....and the announcer parts inbetween was a nice touch...everything seemed to flow nicely, it just went together great I thought....overall this was a nice piece...made a great read...I liked it a lot.

someone nominate this bitch for legends then....lol...i dont think i can do it...if its my own work...

peace

-Nominating it for Legends-




Its the truth. Period.

uppin...

smoke i didnt know you had it in you man
i really didnt..
that is exactly how it is on this site
and you flipped it to make it a joke and to tell the truth at the same time
never seen an Open Mic with this concept before, very creative
and i didnt know you had been here that long either

nice piece man
and dont retire from text man, i need to beat you again lol
naw just bullshittin..
stay up dude

out

as you already know this was a good peice
but you have had your crew for 3 years?
it shouldnt be in the new crews section anymore
it should be in established
get that checked out..