someone in mod ville does want you to losev
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someone in mod ville does want you to losev
if they didnt then they would stop fucking dickriding me and deleting everything i do
i once had like 1200char explanation and they invalidated the vote ...... is anyone thinking that there corrupt and jsut controlling everything so their buddys///alter egos win??????
uppin for honest votes
up3... drop an honest one here
Descent battle but lyric ripped MF..
Michael-you had very few punches, good flow and structure and all, but punches are what win battles and all you gave was a little slap..Not too much action if your askin me lol..
Lyric-atleast you had punches, not bad, had personals aswell..Okay flow and descent structure..Not to many multi's or meta's but your verse was a lot better and struck your opponent more..
Overall vote-Lyric..
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Thanks.....up4
Last up..Come on and drop an honest vote....I follow links to good votes
MF - dropped an ok verse ... had a few punches...a personal or two ... vocab was good....structure was iight and it flowed well ... thought he came pretty decent ....
wordplay was pretty good.....metas not bad at all.... overall i'd say ... 14/20
Lyric - had some nice punches ... structure was good ...came pretty tight here i'd say ... vocab wasnt too bad ... wordplay was ok ... your punches were ok and some personals here and there....more than he had ....metas were nice ... and flow was good ... overall i give you 15/20 ..... just thought u came harder more cosistantly
vote - lyric
MF-Ur structure was all over the place as was ur flow-ur punches needed to be more directed, they could have been about anyone-creativity, I really liked ur closin line that was tight-Overall-I think u need to work on structure,Ur last lines showed u can do it, more consistency.
Lyric-Structure,this was good-Flow,good again-Punches, some witty lines in there,especially liked the 'seein is beleivin' line,that shit was tight,not consistent throughout though-creativity,Yeah this was pretty good could of been better
-Overall, I enjoyed reading this verse.
I think both need to be more consistent as both showed signs of being able emcees.
U asked for an honest vote, this is.
Vote=Lyric
Return the favour MF and drop an honest vote on one of my battles=wiv magnificent-MC aines or Prophesized-Con. Appreciate it
yo yall both did good but i think lyric did a lt better
but u were right behind him
{personal}lyric
{punches}lyric
{structuer}lyric
um all i can say on this really is,
lyric lyric lyric lyric lyric,
to be honest fletely was wak...he had a wak strucutre,
poor punches and a swear some are bit,
alot of played lines also and flow was ite,
but punches didnt hit man............lyric,
your punches came really nice here man,
only bad thing about your verse wich you can,
easily improve is strucutre i just felt you came,
a little streched art times wich can affect flow,
but o well you merked.
MF=can u drop an honest vote on one of my battles an return the favour-would appretiate it
aight i think that lyric takes this for a beteer verse
he also was great in personals and the pounches hit pretty hard
the flow was ok and the struture was good
the opener was good and so was the closer
fav.line from you:
flat had a really good verse alsoQuote:
Originally Posted by lyric
his punches hit
personals were not there...thats what lost you the battle
there was only like 1 and thast was wack
flow was ok
same with strtcture
good verse
u got potential
but for personals and harder punches
v/lyric