uppin x2.....come on dont sleep on dis bitch
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uppin x2.....come on dont sleep on dis bitch
flow...both...decent flow from both...tied in this category
punches...both...decent punches from both...some not that good...but i liked the 'no eyebrows' line and the closer was decent from yo...and the 'hug' line was decent from diverged
personals...both...not very good personals...bad from both so it was a tie
wordplay...n/a...i didn't see any at all i think
multies...n/a/both...either one i don't mind
vote...yo...overall his was better as it was more advanced while divers was more basic
hit up the battles in my sig plz
structure-diverged
flow-YOz
personals-YOz, you lost more battles then youve won //
so what makes you think you winnin against me son// i liked that
punches-Yoz
opener-YOz
closer-YOz
my vote goes to Yozlyricalkilla bc his verse was all around better than diverged
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aight thanx Sik and Mouse 4 the honest vote thats 3-0 youve just been KOed and lyrically killed by me like i said in the call out now lets get some more votes so i can TKO him
what a dumbfuck.. are you on crack.. or wer you borned addicted??.. jeez you suck my shit took bout 5 minutes.. your shit took what a day and a half??
Overall: -Yoz- I felt personally that YOZ won this one. His punches just hit and made the battle a winner. I felt that Diverged was so concentrated on swinging at the verse of YOZ he just blew it. Throw better punches at him. Don’t throw punches at his verse. Throw them at him.
Flow/Structure: -Diverged- Your flow and structure was a bit better than Yoz. You kept constant with you were trying to say and it made a better structure for me to keep up with. Yoz, you had time to fix up your structure a bit but you lacked on that.
Personals: -TIE- I’m not sure really. Yoz the whole asian thing is pretty played out, you needed to swing at him somewhere else, and Diverged, you concentrated too much on what he said rather than just finishing him up. So you cancelled each other out and this was a tie.
Punches: -YOZ- Yoz you had some dope punches. They swung at him, and probably made him think about his verse before he dropped it. But as I said before Diverge you need to punch right at the guy. Don’t punch at his verse.
Good Battle.
appreciated.. but umm.. to let yall no something.. HE DIDNT PUNCH...
yoz, your verse was garabge
you had stretched ass lines
you had elementry flow
you need to step up yo vocab
you didnt have no personals
your punches was weak as hell
you had aby disses, you need to elevate
i will give your verse a 5/10
till/diverge
your punches was weak also, bbut towards
the end of your verse you started to step
up your game and that is what shifted the battle
into your favor, your flow and structure was
not stretched either, and your verse and vocab
wasnt as elementry as yoz
so, my vote goes to Tilleyedie/diverge
ok thats still 4-0 cuz u voted after Kyto thats a TKO but u got one vote so ima keep on thanx 4 tha honest votes ppl
Damn both ya'll were weak, I think tileyedie took it barely.
Yo started off rhyme spit, hit, kit, then spit again wtf? but i liked the writtin kit part it just needed to be worked better.
Yo rhymed gangsta twice then son and won, then when back to spit????/ dam dog
Die what was up with the pretty - baby thug thing? that was weak but the rest was aight. I give it to Die cuz of his punches were better.
lmao Waz....
ayo dawg y havent u checked in n SPIT, is it because none of ya punch lines eva HIT//
afta you read dis y dont you take out ya writing KIT, and listen 2 the reponses and learn 2 SPIT//
^^^^^^Dawg come on dats a multi lol be real 4-2 uppin im killin dis cat
Rules State ... 3-0 = KO ... 4-0 = TKO ...
It Got Up To 4-0 .. So YozKilla Wins This ...
Mod's Fuckin' Suck On This Site .. They Don't Do There Jobs ... Shit's Worthless ..
WILL A MOD CLOSE THIS ... SHIT!
thank you god but still lets get some votes untill dis shit closes
Killas rhyme:: ayo dawg y havent u checked in n spit, is it because none of ya punch lines eva hit//
afta you read dis y dont you take out ya writing kit, and listen 2 the reponses and learn 2 spit//
ok opener but coulda been better , try to throw in multis then jsut using the ol spit, hit,shit,clit rhymes or w/e
ive seen ya pic dawg u a wing asain wit no eyebrows and tried 2 look gangsta//
lol dawg you aint Jin you aint gangsta final dont fuck wit me cuz im a shaksta//
UM what does shaksta mean really??? and try to make it easier to read and understand, but ok
you lost more battles then youve won //
so what makes you think you winnin against me son//
This is pertty played bah but it still flowed pretty good
that asain pride shit needs ta change cuz ua name is till I die//
aint i jus bernt you u herb and left like you were eletricfied//
I like how you tried personals witht eh asian thing and this was one of your betters couplets(?)
im done wit dis cat i aint even tryin spit//
i didnt even do well and im positive ive won dis shit//
_once again you used the spit shit stuff but still it was okkkkkkkk
Tills rhyme::
u suck.. damn.. u shouldnt spit early nor fucking late
this bitch iz from yonkers.. but yet tilley holds ya fate
OK opener but the fate things is pretty played
this bitch got originality.. hes a pretty, and baby Thug
Yeah hes Pretty babyish to be a thug.. so poor baby ya need a hug?
This was hard to understand at first but it madew me laugh so it was good
Fuck thati dont babby sit! i aint ya bitch nor ya mother soo why bother
This Bitch Get His Panties In A Knot.. Because I Help My Father
OK you help your father thats awesome but thats doesnt make any sense so whatever you were getting at i missed the bus, if not for the hard to understandeness of it probably would have hit harder
He's Brave 14 and He Wanna Step Up A Couple Of Years
Fuck It I Hit Hard In The Head.. Now Hes A Baby.. Wiping Tears
pretty weak, you already called him a baby so shoulda come up with some something a little better
He It Dont Matter That I Force Rhymes.. Cuz I Force You
It Dont Matter.. I Force This Win.. Still My Name Aint Luke!
OK very poor closer , starwars=no way to make it good, you also said force 3 times and it really lefta bad taste in my brain
overall it was pretty close but my vote is going to lyricle because he was more consistent and orginal, tills best line(the hug one) was better than any of lyricles but was overshadowed by his other rhymes
vote:killa
plz return and vote honestly on my battle in my sig and also i have a batlle against alcatrakz(yeah hes a vet) at the top of front lines so vote on that even if aginst me
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thanx dawg i voted in the one in front lines ill hit the rest up tho come on this should be closed dats 5-2