topic: flash |vs| Krem

uppin the last time
come drop some votes in here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
leave a link and i'll drop an honest vote

cant poll but id have to go with krem
his flowed better (flashed useed the same word alot)
better multis
more vocab
if u vote on my battle vs se7en
ill poll as soon as i can

aight. here it is.
the Ryme scheme Goes to Flash. Liked the flow
all the way. Plus i thought his Verse was Worded
a liitle Better. Krem. your flow was Ok, but I
Personaly didnt like the One Sylable Ryme Endings.
You both had Good verses and I give you Props to that.
Vocab was Tied. It's hard to vote on complexity and
Vocab in this battle seeing that the Verses were Virtually the same.
Seeing that this was the case, I have to go with Flash on
this One. No Hate Krem, but this is my Honest Opinion.
G' Luck to both of you in the Future. Were all Emcee's Here :laugh:

Vote-Flash :thumbup:

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yo i'm not one 4 this topical shit but flash came mad nice

vocab ---> flash
interest ---> flash
authenticity---> flash

dnt get me rong krem was aiight but flashs shit had me believin his story

aight.

both had good shit, Liked the flow from krem
both verses nicely worded
Flash, your flow was Ok, but I
but the on syllable rhyme scheme shit dont cut it
You both had Good verses
Vocab was very closely matched...so thats a tie there
both verses show complete vocab complexity
but i just felt the way krem delivered the topic
also his verse was alot easier to read
my Honest Opinion.

Vote- Krem

niggaz be sleepin on this site and shit...wake the fuck up and vote on this shit...

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i hate niggas that be lookin at this site and be post votin but they dun even poll vote

fuckin take 4 days jus tah finish a simple topical battle

wake the fuck up this is my 3 uppin for votes...only gots 2 left

well i thought this was pretty close here... flash your verse had a smooth flow going.... your vocab and scheme tho could be upp'd.... seemed quite basic in places.... but i liked your take on the topic.... verb... the oconcept you had, with the different verses could have been worked nicely.. but you lacked in the rhyming you had going on... also it wasnt as interesting as i thought it was gonna be at a glance.... close, but im voting flash this time.... ive seen better topicals,,,, but these were pretty even matched.....

thanks for the votes people...need some more so this can finally be finished

tight battle. both came good. both came with really good messages. both had their individual strong points in there verses. Krem had the structure. you both had the flow in this. i felt flashes message a it more because he expressed it with a better quality i think. it wasn't basic, and it was more original. you both came wit a sort of a story that related to something common, but wit all the dialogue, flashes appealed to me. Krem came good but limited in the creativity. it held back you verses shine. so for those reasons...

vote-flash

props to both. real nice verses, good topic.

peace

Dope topicals.. from both of you
I've seen better reads.. but I did enjoy both of these.

This was pretty close in most all areas, except for one thing. Flash, to me, told the story and had better imagery then Krem did. The entire point he was trying to get across in his verse just popped right out to me. Krem's did too.. but not as well as did Flashes verse. Flow's were both pretty decent. Vocab was ok.... flash with the more interesting read and better point

vote-flash

id say flash on this gave it more effort
likes his story more and shit ya heard me
as for krem kinda came whack in some areas
no hate but krem you need to elavate man
flash yur getting there just work on it more
vote/flash for overall better imagination ok