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Ok Break Down:
Too Dope:
Your verse wasn’t dope your verse was very basic. Need punches
Punches, punches to win a battle and personals help remember that.
Ak Mixa:
Nice start some ok punches came at him straight forward.
Easy read because your structure was on point.
Mines sometimes isn’t lmao. Good enough to win this one.
Too Dope stay elevating on punches. Twist your lines have a double meaning
And come funny think your flows out before dropping. No hate just take the advice.
Vote= Ak Mixa better battle verse.
Peace
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my vote has to go to ak cuz his rhyme were better and his flowed better
breakdown
flow:ak
structure:ak even tough it was kinda weak
multis:no one you guys gotta try harder
personals:ak
punches:ak cuz he atleast tried toodpes punches were so bad and pointless they were they equivalent of a shiatsu massage
overall:ak
you both gave good effort but ak came out ontop
and since i took the time to vote on your battle vote on mine
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
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both verses sucked
too dope...... was that a battle verse or just a key in
ak-mixa...... i saw a punch or two in there, and u had good vocab
punches-ak, oviously, i already stated dope had none
vocab- again too dope had no vocab past a kindergarden readin level
multies- ~~~~~~
laughability- dope cuz his sucked so much, too bad it dont count
so my vote goes to ak, even though both verses were terrible
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uppin............................................. ...................1 more poll vote................
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aqight my vote goes to ak mixa
he had the better verse and the better punches
just work on personals and ull b ok
the other came came elementary and had nothing standing out to me
ok battle but my vote goes to ak mixa
yo hit up the battles in my sig and then i will come back and poll vote my vote
peace