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no not really even if his structure was like yours his personals come down hard on you like he got at where you are from ""And tell me where in the fuck could you find this "Dirty Bean"
The same place you'll find a site where this herb's 17-3"" those is wut really gave him this battle other wise you both are good
uppin
Uppin for the merkin..............................
uppin 4 my main man sdizzle, if u can do it queleude, i can do it 2
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sdizzle: Your verse was decent but the structure sucked. Alot of your lines/punches were played. Some of your shit was really nice though like this line:
I was feeling that. Next time though, work on your structure because it makes it easier to read and judge.Quote:
Quelude betta than Mines??i'll make you ~Swallow ya Pride~ like ~Cannabilistic Lions
Quelude:
Your vocab wasn't as good as SDizzle's but your structure was way better, your punches connected better, and you had some nice personals. Some of your lines were filler but overall it was a nice verse.
Vote-Quelude
No Hate, return the favor.
guess im uppin
sdizzle - structure was wack.......flow fell off due to the wackness in the structure.......vocab was nice.......good multis........wordplay was pretty good.......it seemed like u were more focused on gettin wordplay than punches.......i didnt see to many connecting punches.......ok personals......
quelude - structure was good......flow was on target......vocab was ok........some of the multis were good......wordplay was pretty good.........most of the punches connected........pretty good personals......
breakdown -
structure - quelude
flow - quelude
vocab - sdizzle
multis - sdizzle
wordplay - sdizzle
punches - quelude
personals - quelude
conclusion - quelude takes this because he had better structure, flow, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote......
VOTE - QUELUDE
uppin
isn't the only reason i voted for him..... but it was honest and i hope you would do the same for me... plz vote for the battle in my sig...thnks