Brethren vs. Eki

Im calm..

vte-Brethren-

He had more personals and he didnt come as played out as the other cat, he also had better flow

Anyways could one of yous vote on this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113709

Peace

uppin #2 (I think) .

Uppin #3, wanna help me up this Eki??? .

eki

Am gonna leave Brethen more exposed than Janet
Kid tried to elevate..
But his wackness had more gravity than this planet
nice opener, ouch
Kid posts in the battle " house Rules" errr no thanks
Unlike in your house i aint into whips handcuffs and spanks
blah...
honestly man your a kid from you sig writing to you avatar
squashed Brethen painted him in gold than hanged him.......
only way he could even come close to being a star
flow changed up here... eh punch was weak
Even if Brethen got dopness injected into every cell
Wackness cells like bad sins.. would send em all to hell
blah....
Because he cant cope .. with anything dope.. and hes desolving
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still could start evolving....
nice... changed flow up again with good punch behind it
Ekis so far ahead of brethen ... speed of light wouldnt help
Brethens spits are nothing..
you could hold em..and they still wouln't be felt
haha good punch
Ill use a invisable Meta.... And compare hes skill
nice try... but no dice on the invisible meta... you mean you couldn't thinka 1 lol

All in all a decent verse though...

and

Brethren-

Eki's throwing a punch at nobody, when was this bitch accepted?
Your verse was ass backwards ... kinda like your shit is dyslexic,
eh...
Stabbing his chest in, with your inside out verse like manic depression,
You a walking diagnostic test, you teach me?! My standards are lessoned, (lessened)
wordplay ok...I guess
Preist I have a confession, I never wrote a dope line, just 18 line suicide letters,
Who am I better than?!, I'm fake see, even my truest lines are headers,
what?
Here's a peroid (.), I'll watch and see if you can flip a noise tight,
Eki failed at being wack, he couldn't even diss-a-point right,
DOPE
You got an advantage on me?! Like having AIDS on Erkle's,
I'll have you sweating red more than gatorade commercials,
nice, haven't heard that one lol
Why you alway got fags on ya mind, if anybodies gay your worse,
I slayed your verse, you sit and make a diss thread, just to obey-your-thirst,
blah...
You got the crowd like "wack, wack" the way your verse is so fowl, (foul, duck, wack)
Brethren's versatyle, need help, ^^^ haven't been to church in a while,
set up was witty, then what happened?
On stage with that garbage, like a crack head, quick to be givin the cane,
You livin a game, Fag's on your brain stem, why you got Spinal Bifida pain,
nah....
Eki, from Mike & Ike flipped his name to go solo, switched companies so what,
After I beat his ass with a 3 foot long bat, watch this 'fruit roll up'.
shitty closer.


I have to give this to Eki... his structure was better, he was more consistant. But Brethren you tight too.... it was hella close

pz

yo return the favor and drop an honest vote here:

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114933

or here

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115255

3-1 uppin #4........................................

uppin............................................. .....................

Winnner = Brethen

Eki- ok verse, wasnt Nothing Special, You Came Weak.. Your Flow Was There, But Both Of You Had Played Things. Your Punches Hit And Missed, When Hit, Not Hard. Your Vocab Was Ok, And Your Wordplay Was Nice. Opener Was Whack, And Closer Was Ok. Overall Verse- 7/10

Brethen- OK Verse, Same As His, Nothing Special. Your Flow Was Nice, And Your Structure Was..Ok.....Like I Said, U Had Played Things And He Did Too, your Punches HIt Harder Then His, And Your Vocab Was Ok. Wordplay Was Nice Also, I Liked The Opener And I LIke The Closer. Very Tuff Battle, Close. Overall Verse- 7.5/10

Vote- Brethen

Hit This Up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115637

Okay final uppin, number 5 for all you turkey's. 4-1

Hit this up honestly both of you
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...41#post1208341

Eki
Am gonna leave Brethen more exposed than Janet
Kid tried to elevate..
But his wackness had more gravity than this planet
^^Good line but a little played

Kid posts in the battle " house Rules" errr no thanks
Unlike in your house i aint into whips handcuffs and spanks
^^LOL...i liked that

honestly man your a kid from you sig writing to you avatar
squashed Brethen painted him in gold than hanged him.......
only way he could even come close to being a star
^^^blah..didn't rhyme

Even if Brethen got dopness injected into every cell
Wackness cells like bad sins.. would send em all to hell
^^should have been worded different

Because he cant cope .. with anything dope.. and hes desolving
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still could start evolving....
^^pretty good

Ekis so far ahead of brethen ... speed of light wouldnt help
Brethens spits are nothing..
you could hold em..and they still wouln't be felt
^^LOL best line of your verse

Ill use a invisable Meta.... And compare hes skill
^^^....???


Breth
Eki's throwing a punch at nobody, when was this bitch accepted?
Your verse was ass backwards ... kinda like your shit is dyslexic,
^^LOL...enjoyed that opening

Stabbing his chest in, with your inside out verse like manic depression,
You a walking diagnostic test, you teach me?! My standards are lessoned, (lessened)
^^Good

Preist I have a confession, I never wrote a dope line, just 18 line suicide letters,
Who am I better than?!, I'm fake see, even my truest lines are headers,
^^That was good could'a hit harder if worded different though i think

Here's a peroid (.), I'll watch and see if you can flip a noise tight,
Eki failed at being wack, he couldn't even diss-a-point right,
^^not bad

You got an advantage on me?! Like having AIDS on Erkle's,
I'll have you sweating red more than gatorade commercials,
^^lol that was funny

Why you alway got fags on ya mind, if anybodies gay your worse,
I slayed your verse, you sit and make a diss thread, just to obey-your-thirst,
^^meh

You got the crowd like "wack, wack" the way your verse is so fowl, (foul, duck, wack)
Brethren's versatyle, need help, ^^^ haven't been to church in a while,
^^blah word that different and could be hard hittin

On stage with that garbage, like a crack head, quick to be givin the cane,
You livin a game, Fag's on your brain stem, why you got Spinal Bifida pain,
^^LOL good line

Eki, from Mike & Ike flipped his name to go solo, switched companies so what,
After I beat his ass with a 3 foot long bat, watch this 'fruit roll up'.
^^lol that was a good closer


Over all breth took this with wittier punches and more consitant punches. eki this wasn't one of your better verses..but still a good read. but breth just better...good read from both peace