ORION vs. MAGNIFICENT

you know what. I usualy dont do this but sence u talked so much shit orion, ima jus go out and say, u suck dude.

fav line from mag:

Quote:

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Originally Posted by mag...

balls like discos, huge and catchin your lady's glance
do some threesome spooge after I work ya lil sis out her pants

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this made me laugh. nice punch
overall, no personals but u didnt need any. Punches were good and rhyme scheme was great.

fav line from orion:

Quote:

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Originally Posted by orion

OBSERVE the VERBAL WRAITH REGURGITATE nuclear WASTE/
Hunting you like GERMAN MERCANARY SEARCHING for Anne FRANK//

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your only good meta. didnt rhyme that good though. nice.
overall, dude, wtf r u talkin about. Your sayin takes time to learn to write like that or some shit...that font was gay, bold was gay, lines wer uneven...was hard to read. Please keep it reasonable for the reader. Also, you used too many big words that didnt make any sence. You can keep it basic sometimes. All that stupid shit makes your verse look prewritten and stupid.


breakdown:
structure: mag
flow: mag
wordplay: mag
rhyme scheme: mag
punches: mag
metas: mag
personals: didnt c any


mag, u merked him. He cleary needs to read som battles. Either way though, good battle. No hate. Honest opinion.

P.S. Orion, dont talk so much shit unless u know your good...no hate though, jus bugs me that u would do all that.

please return fav if u can.

my votes is going to orion

mag..: your verse was good but you lacked punches though for how long it tok its pretyt decent with some ok multis. the lil sis line is pretty played but still managed to hit pretyt hard. still all together a solid but short verse. 6.5/10

Orion: i agree with mag in the fact that you wrote too much for the bar count, drop a link to an audo of you spitting and ill believe you. but you came with really nice vocab and multis. Your flow was kinda wack and plz do not type in that font with certian parts caped up thats so bad. but your punches hit hard and overall you won.
7.3/10

Since i voted plz vote on my battles becuz there so old and slept on i jsut want some closer plz.

wow i thought this battle was destined to die in the recesses of FL... thnks for acknowledging this prewrite against me though Yaaa-boi...

im not dickridin...but if you people would look, orion shit looks prewritten big time...Even if it isnt, all those words didnt meen anything. No punch, no win. How it goes. Experienced people please vote on this. I dont wanna see a clear win loose for stupid reasons.

Oh ya, please clear up my battles people. Anybody please. No hate votes though.

up^^^^^^^^^^^^for the love of god vote on this shit...

fav line from mag:Mag's gonna shoot in his face change his eye colour to white
give no respite, take flight n spark the craziest battle line
now you've stumbled on da darkest place of diss mind
it's diss time, it's diss rhyme made with da illest design

line from orion:

A LEARNING COMPUTER, Absorbing SURGES of THERMAL RAYS/
A tactician, and Magnificent is the next PERSON I TERMINATE//
I’m not psycho, but I IMPESONATE NORMAN BATES/
As STRANGE voices URGE me to kill you in a MURDEROUS RAGE//

breakdown:
flow:mag
structure:mag
mutlies:tie
punchliens:tie
overall vote goes to mag
IM GOING TO DROP A LINK CAN U PLEAS VOTE IN IT MAG.... (HONEST VOTE) PLEASE RETURN FAVOR

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Don't think you're getting away with just copying and pasting any favorite lines. - Axiom

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118714

mag... please vote on this honestly thank u

damn...people say they dont know what the words mean huh....so i dont get a vote because these n*66as didnt pay attention in english class.....

fav line from mag:Mag's gonna shoot in his face change his eye colour to white
give no respite, take flight n spark the craziest battle line
now you've stumbled on da darkest place of diss mind
it's diss time, it's diss rhyme made with da illest design

line from orion:

A LEARNING COMPUTER, Absorbing SURGES of THERMAL RAYS/
A tactician, and Magnificent is the next PERSON I TERMINATE//
I’m not psycho, but I IMPESONATE NORMAN BATES/
As STRANGE voices URGE me to kill you in a MURDEROUS RAGE//

breakdown:
flow:mag
structure:mag
mutlies:tie
punchliens:tie
overall vote goes to mag

return the favor and hit my sig

i cant vote but close battle but i thoufht orion did betta cuz the punches hit harder for me and were more complex and mag did good too but not as good as orion in my opinion...hit my sig up plz thx.........1