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pretty good battle but John Dough came much harder. Kayohh didnt have many good punches he had more filler type shit. the best thing about his verse was the multies in the last bar, and his structure. other than that he had a lame played verse. John dough had good personals, good flow, and his punches were solid and consistent. both verses could use more multies but if your punches are better it really doesnt matter much.
VOTE_JOHN DOUGH
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Aight then uppin this
1-1 I guess..lol
But lets get some more votes
Uppin this...
1-1 still...
les see some explained votes.
U hurt yourself when u spit..first rapper I've seen in a cast
I can't remember shit..
..And I'd still rather have my past!
ok...kinda weak
Ya trapped in wackness like it was tha matrix..you ain't a vet
Kay's on tha phone to leave..
.....But I pulled it from tha outlet!
blah weak
Ya money's my slut & ya talents ya money - whored ya wealth
You don't believe me? shit..
.....Just click his sig..& see for yourself
ok
That must suck,elevating forever..yet u haven't left tha ground
Kid I herbed ya tha first time..
.....But its tha same in both rounds!
played concept
Thinks he's tha shit,3-0 rec,when "nonamen00b" was his best win
You wanna know tha outcome of this battle?
....Peep my check in..
Mad played bar
Time ta eat again grab, utensils, a pada papa n some, pencils,
This "John Doe" wrote the same shit last round, must be usin, stencils;
ok...ok multis
Listen to tha, sound to, this lyrical "knock-out" in, round two,
You betta be ready fo Irish "dough", cuz Im feelin ta, "Pound" you;
ok
Last time he paid Intox to knock my, verse thas full, of, personals,
But this time Ima rob him of everything, miniskirt g-string, purse n all;
lol nice...but whats with the fuckin commas?
W/e he writes back will, not be rap, jus give up this time, don't react,
PM'in me, "I love your dick!", this explains his, cocky act;
weak..played
He jumped at every, curse in ma verse, wave bye as his, hearse disperse,
Now hes hidin climbin back inta his shell, like a chick, birth in reverse;
good
KayOhh wins this...He had more punches and creativity...JD came too played and his punches were weak
PLease drop an honest vote here..I took the time for yall...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115298
Uppin this...
Les settle this, its good battle,
Drop some links...
Uppin...
Drop links, I'll check out ur battles.
Okie battle vote john dough
John dough...your first bar i didn't understand...but your punches and personals were more consistant and creative...over all a good verse
Kayohh...your verse was weak...nothing really stood out to me the lines could've been harder if you wolud have re-worded them. But nothing really stood out to me.
Return the faver and both of you hit up my soft focus battle vs daz....thanks
Lets not sleep on this anymore,
By the way, this guy changed his name,
It used to be "John Dough", jus so there's no comfusion on the personals, aight?
up...
noah artic, i really didn't like your structure it completely took away w/e flow u were goin for and either i was distracted from that or sumin cus i didn't even read any good punches
kayohh i actually could read your structure and could pic out your flow, so das bout how it goes. i understood your punches the first time through alot better and in a real battle das what counts. but dont put a space between your verses.
over all i jus didnt like artic's verse some dumb lines and real hard to follow. kayohh had a much better flow and more understandable punches.
vote- kayohh
hit up w/e battles i got goin on in my signiture pleez
Kay had good multis... Dough had punches... who do you think I'm gonna vote for..?
Fuck breakin it down...
Verb.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded
^^^^Mods, this is a bs vote, les get rid of it....
My vote was bs..?! We'll let Verb break it down...
John Dough...
U hurt yourself when u spit..first rapper I've seen in a cast
I can't remember shit..
..And I'd still rather have my past!
Fucking stupid... I understood it... but it was fuckin stupid... 3/10
Ya trapped in wackness like it was tha matrix..you ain't a vet
Kay's on tha phone to leave..
.....But I pulled it from tha outlet!
Hum... nice try at a punch... it was newbie like but ok... 3/10
Ya money's my slut & ya talents ya money - whored ya wealth
You don't believe me? shit..
.....Just click his sig..& see for yourself
ok personal... and... Verb says 4/10
That must suck,elevating forever..yet u haven't left tha ground
Kid I herbed ya tha first time..
.....But its tha same in both rounds!
better personal... and Verb says 5/10
Thinks he's tha shit,3-0 rec,when "nonamen00b" was his best win
You wanna know tha outcome of this battle?
....Peep my check in..
I like... nothing fantastic... nothing great... 5/10
Total: 20/50
Kay...
Dough: A deer, a female deer, bitch,
Kay: A drop of golden sun, check it
El Garbo... 0/10... It was a line... don't act liek it wasn't...
Time ta eat again grab, utensils, a pada papa n some, pencils,
This "John Doe" wrote the same shit last round, must be usin, stencils;
Hum... a pencil/stencil line... Verb says 1/10... Played says the world...
Listen to tha, sound to, this lyrical "knock-out" in, round two,
You betta be ready fo Irish "dough", cuz Im feelin ta, "Pound" you;
first of all... no. I'm not even sure what kind of corrolation you were trying to make but it was garbo... If you were speaking of money... English would've been the way to go... cause only part uses pounds in Ireland... all of England uses it... just bad usage... 2/10
Last time he paid Intox to knock my, verse thas full, of, personals,
But this time Ima rob him of everything, miniskirt g-string, purse n all;
only good line you had... 5/10
W/e he writes back will, not be rap, jus give up this time, don't react,
PM'in me, "I love your dick!", this explains his, cocky act;
backfired not to mention the stupidity of the line... 2/10...
He jumped at every, curse in ma verse, wave bye as his, hearse disperse,
Now hes hidin climbin back inta his shell, like a chick, birth in reverse;
1st line... BLAH... 2nd line... could have been worded better... 4/10...
total: 14/60...
do the math...
Vote Dough... again.
Kay Ohh bro.. you know the rules.. you can only up 5 times and every post after both verses are posted is considered an up.
Sorry but you are DQed.