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Uppin # 2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cmon My Cats Vote!!!!!!!!!!!
Yo i will give this vote to Yo what up/ me and u had a battle u won fair and square except u didnt needa report me but ill give u this mayne u won this shit and Pac wannabee GO TO THE WACKNESS EMEGENCY CENTER it will help U!!!! stop this shit wow Yo what up is mah vote! He had better personals and good punchs!
^^thanx for admittin u lost fair and square, and i appreciate ur vote.......
UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
makavelli , an what up came pretty weak here,
but yo what up gets my vote.
harder hitting punches, it came down to in the end, noe of the verse really had flow, or anything else,
makavelis was just too simple, an no punches were contained.
yo what up, make your shit shirter fix your paragraphs/bars, an elevate.
yo what up
harder hitting punches
drop an hinest vote on this real quick, i took the time out to do it here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114714
^^^thanx for the vote......
UPPIN # 4 !!!!!!!!!!!!
UPPIN # 5 !!!!!!!!!!
CMON HOES......VOTE!!!!!!!
leave a link and ill return the favor...........
Yo What Up got this because he actually used complexity and attempted wordplay.
Mak came with elementary schoolyard shit, talkin bout his momma and nutsacks and whatever ("jackin off with ya finger in ya rear"??? Are you serious with that shit?!?!.
No attempt at wordplay, no metaphors...
Basically just yelling.
Yo What Up desperately needs to SHORTEN THE SHIT OUTTA HIS LINES!!!
And quit trying to get flow from multi's, damnnit!
Barely, Yo What Up
Makaveli - pre-skool played b/s general cack.. nothin to compliment im afraid.. disgustin in every department.. seek help..
Yo - the fukk u battlin that cat for?! U dropped a nice verse wen a shit one woulda sufficed.. props for that.. ya opener was enuff to kill ya opponent.. witty.. creative.. personal.. an packed a punch too..
VoTe = Yo
Drop a vote here a.s.a.p:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112698
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makaveli rest had mostly played punches about moms, no use of multis and wordplay, his punches werent worded well, and he didnt have any personals yo what up came with ok multis, some pretty good personals, his structure is fucked up he needs to shorten his damn lines, some of his punches were good
mah vote=yo wat up