lol
calm down its just a battle
so i wrote my lins then u, either your usin that as an excuse or tryin to win with a technicality
either way stop talkin shit already and let the people vote
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lol
calm down its just a battle
so i wrote my lins then u, either your usin that as an excuse or tryin to win with a technicality
either way stop talkin shit already and let the people vote
::uppn 4 VOTES::
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Originally Posted by Bio*Chemist
LOL - I wasnt even gonna vote cuz i knew your faggot ass would say somethin ....
I know you have some talent but you came weak as hell and i think the other kid edged it. Seriously, your shit sucked ... both of 'em did
Call me a newbie again, i guess we'll have to set a battle up so i can rip you
Please stop you can't rip me believe that...
stop freeposting in my thread...
enough said ..
uppin
Don't sleep on my boyz front lines everyone deserves to have their battles closed...uppin this to top so peeps stop sleepin leave links...
Unwritten hazard you had some strange structure that i couldn't quite follow that well. I dunno if its just me but i think u gottah work on it. Concepts too! You wanna keep certain "related" thought in the same "bar" cause u were jumpin all over the place with the whole biological warfare bit. Anyways good vocabulary and fair personals. COuld have been better tho. just keep at it.
Bio Chemist you had flawless structure and you knew when to stop. I admire that. some peeps prolong there verse till no1 wants to read it or listen 2 it anymore. So good job on that. Your concepts were alright. Maybe couldah used a bit more creativity. Punches were good same wit personals. Overall I would say da chemist won this rhyme bout.
but good job 2 both of u
damn, this shits old, i was supprised to see it on page 3 lol
anyway, thanks for the feed sabotage.
uppn.
Spacist lyrist's vote should be d/qed
u put in the rules no crew votes and he's a I.J.L. like bio*chemist
unwritten u gotta pick up on that
i would vote but i hate bio chemist so i would be a hate vote
but i still think unwritten will win this as long as no more IJL's vote
lmao..this was a funny thread to read with all the side comments :laugh:
Anywho..
IMO, Bio got this simply because he was so much more creative and witty. His personals hit pretty hard, even though some were played, they were humorous, which is always a plus :thumbup: ... However, Bio, your shit didnt rhyme alot of the time, rhyme scheme was way off..example:
..lolz, see what I'm sayin? there were a few more like that too..work on that and you'll be aiight. Not a bad drop.Quote:
Originally Posted by Bio*Chemist
And Unwritten, you came with a lot of lines, sure, but alot of it was weak. Nothin was really standing out to me at all, and your structure was fucked up beyond repair...lolz, maybe not that bad, but it resulted in hurtin your flow and made it harder to read..work on that...
To both, keep elevatin..
Vote / Bio
Peace..
unwritten- u had little punches and personels. while readin i almost forgot it was a battle. ur flow was aight and ur structure was good. its just ur punches and personals u had alot less than bio.
bio chemist- u had punches and personals, better ones and more than him. ur flow and structure was aight too. chemist, u had better punches than unwrittin thats why bio gets mah vote.
vote: bio chemist
you know i am battlin DA kid....he da faq east of philly, and i will go against whatever he said
Wow these comments are all pretty rediculous. Makes me wonder why i even ask for feedback on my shit but here is my opinion.
Unwritten I like you verse better than bio's actually and he is acting like a little bitch over stupid shit. BUT one thing he's right about is that u broke the rules. Since u guys didn't come to any agreement I can't give u my vote cuz of the rules violation. But I felt you did have some nice punches, wordplay, and multis. You came halfway intelligent with it and this site needs more of that. less filler next time
Bio your verse was played and you're getting nothing but bs votes. I refuse to give you my vote cuz u are acting like a little bitch. Oh an after you continually freepost you tell others not to do it, you are a deusche. Don't complain when some1 votes against you, learn to take criticism cuz your shit is far from perfect.
Vote would go to unwritten but due to rule violation I'm not leavin a vote. Sorry guys.. hit up my battle with thing and my lost a friend open mic.
Bio got this
hazard's structure was wack which fucked his flow up to
best lines were:
U proved Ur a newbie using 16 lines, Follow the rules How illiterate,
Even if I -Clowned Ur scripts- U still wouldn’t be an -Insane Joker Lyricist-
which are bios
bio got flow vocab structure and personals o and punches
multis were tie
wotta merking
BIO WON EASY
hazard u really need to elevate man work on it
remember to make the whole thing personals
V/ Bio
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120021
Not that great of a battle, but Bio definitly took this....
Unwritten...okay verse..but it seriously lacked punches.
I think you only had one or two actual punches and
they were weak at best...yer personals were also pretty
eneffectual, and were missing any real creativity...overall
you did a poor job at dissing yer opponent, instead you
stuck to using mostly filler and self-glorification..
for example...
work on yer punches and personals and try to useQuote:
i joined rap battles, and like a stray "kat", people showed me no love//
my inks blood, cause rap is the only thing that i think of//
more creatvity...also be more direct w/ yer disses
and dont talk about yourself...elevate
Bio decent verse...you had some okay punches and
personals, not the best ive seen from you, but it didn't
need to be....also your verse seemed alot more direct
and you actually dissed your opponenet...though i
would have liked to see better creativity, you still get
this w/ a better overall verse
v/ Bio Chemist