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your Own Crew Voted against you..thats Funny..no hate tho..
Honestly i thionk i won in this battle...oliverclothesoff, you hadda good punches..
but i seriously think i got this..these voters are bullshittin..even tho they might not have a reason too..
i aint swayin, but Kryolgenics had the best OVERALL explanation in this battle, then thought i won..whether it was barely or NOT..
HOPEFULLY VOTERS TAKE A SECOND LOOK BEFORE DROPPIN A CLUELESS VOTE....
UppIn
yes boss!!!!! im still winnin though 3-0 upppiin number 3
^^ I wish you would stop sayin the word boss..seriously...it gets annoying enough over aim..
boss calm down.....lol........yo upppin dis bitch mother fuckersss uppin number 4
Here it is.
Flow=Oliver, he had just a bit better flow on his drop, Killa a lot of your lines didn't really rhyme which threw off your flow, but keep working on that.
Punches=Killa, I liked some of his punches and they hit a bit harder than Olivers did, Oliver used a lot of mom punches that are just so played.
Personals=Killa, he had more personals some of which I thought were pretty funny, Oliver you had a couple personals but they weren't really that good, you should work on developing personals.
Vocab=Tie, I didn't really see much vocab that wasn't basic in this battle, both of you should work on improving your vocab, it should help a bit.
Over all=Killa, you had a pretty good drop here, you had some good personals and punches, you should work on your flow it got kind of choppy in the middle of your verse, but over all I liked your drop, it had some funny lines in it, just keep it up.
Oliver, you had an okay drop here, I just didn't really feel your punches hit hard enough and you didn't really have any good personals either, you should work on developing both your personals and punches a bit more, just keep at it and you'll get where you want to go.
Vote=Killa
aiight no doubt^^^ uppin number mother fuckin 5 mah last one
uppin..
mah 2 or 3 ...
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I can't vote on this shit yet cuz of my posts... got to say this is close though...Quote:
Originally Posted by KiLLa_CaLi
killa cali... is this the real killa cali or what?! californigga? that you?! lmao
...^^Vote..Pleez..Uppin mah 4rth..
should be 2-3 OR 3-3..But some cant POLL or EVEN forgot To..
POLL VOTE..^^plus crew votez...blah..
and for ya Question..maybe..LoL..Watch Out..LoL
aight yo im just postin to get this back on 1st page...holla
aight this page is on da second page now and i know no one will scroll all the way here so imma post this to get it back on the first page
oo man....pretty one sided....i wuld have to say that da chef took this one mainly for harder hitting punches.....hiz punches had a lot of impact on them....good shyt
killa- not that urz was bad...ur was good and all.....but i think dat the chef pretty much took this
punches: da chef.....easily
flow: chef....good shyt with the rhythm
structure:chef...and thats easily visible
vote: chef.....both need 2 elevate....one
oliver - structure was ok........flow fell off a lil........vocab was pretty good........some of the multis were good.........ok wordplay........most of the punches connected........pretty good personals........
killa - structure was good........flow was on target.......vocab was ok........nice multis........wordplay was aight.......some of the punches were ok.........ok personals.......
breakdown -
structure - killa
flow - killa
vocab - tie
multis - killa
wordplay - tie
punches- oliver
personals - oliver
creativity - oliver
conclusion - oliver takes this in punches, personals, and creativity so he gets my vote......
VOTE - OLIVER
yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback id appreciate if u two did the same.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114227
thanx.......