Uppin!!!! I Can Only Do This 1 Time A Day So Please Vote We Need Some Votes On This.......
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Uppin!!!! I Can Only Do This 1 Time A Day So Please Vote We Need Some Votes On This.......
shorty:your opener was obvious and simple, the punch barely tapped him. your structure was ayite. you need to build your vocabulary, cause name,lame, frame, tame....just doesn't cut it, your should crack a dictionary. you tried to use a multiple but it was played and obvious, I saw it coming before I even got to it, you need to sit back and think for a second, and use some creativity. you didn't have any wordplay, but then again, nobody ever seems to, so fuck that, your closer was I'm sorry to say this..awful..gun punches are really amature.....
black grenade:you had a sad opener as well, your vocabulary is very small, build on that. your punches were few and far between, plus plain, this battle wasn't any fucn to read..your structure was good though, it flowed decent enough so I was stutter stepping in my head...you had no multiples or wordplay..your closer was accually the best thing out of your whole verse, it was structured well, the sylables matched up, and the punch hit pretty hard........
you both need to practice a lot harder, if you plan on winning any battles..
since I have to vote.........I gotta go with black grenade...
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now you know what to do...vote on these.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114089
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112366
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113218
Still upping this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
vote Shorty
give you-a-kick, killa-u-quick
just the thought of u is making me-a-sick
best line in the whole thread
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You didn't even vote bro
Upping 4 Votes People!!!
come on people VOTE!!!
UPPING!!!! NEED VOTES
UPPIN this 4 the last time we really need votes!
come on people u need those points
Yeah Both Of Yall Were Equally Wack As Fuck....
So Wack I Dont Know Whos Shit Smelt Worse
wack like your signature i reakon now that is wack as
upping this
UPPIN (3rd time) Need votes please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ehh fuck this.. both ehh elevate.. shorty u noshowed on our battle what a loser.. well who cares i gotta get a mod to close that anyways
Undead.. blah ive seen you drop better in our battle but not much better your punches hmmm.. what punches.. didnt feel any.. niether did shorty.. but overall you did have the better verse..
Shorty.. Whack.. ohhh yeah ur whack.. wait u should elevate throw a PUNCH!!!!!! jeez
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uppin 4th time!! neeed votesss!! please people!
This is the last time i can up this so please if u visit this thread vote!!