Sorry, A second read-thru showed me that you had a lot of internal rhymes that I hadn't noticed. So ignore above advice and accept even more props.
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Sorry, A second read-thru showed me that you had a lot of internal rhymes that I hadn't noticed. So ignore above advice and accept even more props.
you good but you are different, for example you use no slang and you never use threats...you are basically a story teller and a self describer...like nas used to be
^thanx for the feedback. much appreciation.
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