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aiight not da best battle i've ever seen but it was aiight....lyrical mc takes dis one because he had punches and better flow/structure....lust could've one only if he had taken da time to fix his structure cuz his shyt wasnt dat bad, sorry i can poll vote but id say lyrical mc takes dis one no doubt
Both Ov Yall Suck! I Never Seen Such A Shity Battle. Those Rymz Were Cheaper Than Both Ov Ya Mammaz. Stick To Wut Ever Else It Iz That Yoo Guyz Do Cuz Rappin Aint It.
Ya Bitchdizzles.
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This battle was weak, i think both of you need to practice alot!! I'm only battling on noob battles because i remember what it was like never getting any votes, this sin't really voting on. . .But
Lyrical Mc takes structure even though their was very little of it, his verse flowed slightly better, but both catergories are taken marginly, also his punches hit a bit harder and he attempted punchlines but the concepts didn't get worded properly therefore didn't follow through. Keep practicing Lust and Lyrical.
V/Lyrical MC
Lyrical MC check your PM's.
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yes real weak battle but the NEWB lust gets this battle because of his structuer was just alittle better...............
v/LUST
well, lyrical mc had a much better verse i thought, ok punches, you had a couple of nice meta's...the opener would of been better if that typo wasnt there..i couldnt really tell what you were trying to say....that last word on the first line.....(distabalize??? or disablize???) your flow was alright, went a little long in a couple of spots, but it went well.....structure was ok...the content was mleh....alright i guess, still enough to get him the win..
Lust-your flow and structure are a little off, makes it a bit hard to read, your closer was weak and didnt rhyme...try to work on those closers...and lots of your words dont rhyme very well, some vocab would prolly help....your punches were kinda weak...try being a little more creative....i've seen better from both of you...keep at it guys....
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oops...sorry vote: Lyrical MC
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dis was a close battle...lyrical mc takes it tho coz his punches hit harder and he had flow.....lust was ok but he jst wasnt as good as lyrical mc...
v/lyrical mc
Lyrical MC: you had a great flow going on; your punches came thru real hard and you had sum nice multis; I would like to see more of your personals tho cuz you had only a few; your structure was aight
Lust: You din't have anything called a flow; your punches were just played with no real interesting words; you barely had personals and your verse din't make any sense; your structure was aight I suppose
Overall vote : Lyrical MC