UrbanReelist vs Veloci-Rapper

It amazes me to know how you actually think that you have a chance in this thing
Reminds me of that asian guy on American idol who thot he culd dance and sing
^^hee hee... dub hung is like my hero...but a dope line too... coulda played off of it a bit more in the next line... good structure overall nothing to complex though i was a little dissapointed...

ya just like my former lover who neva took showers ya extinct (ex stink) and i'm neva shook when it comes ta droppin so i won't no show ya like a clumsy pornstar your the only ones ta drop the ball and choke
^^just grabbed a passage that was ok... see i would have grabbed my fav line... if you had lines... this block structure is just annoying and hard to read... besides i slogged through it three times still couldn't find a decent rhyme... work on structure...punchs were good but...personals sucked...

vote = ace

Pretty good from both of you.

Ace that was good i've seen better from you.
U.R. that was good too.


Still, my vote goes to Ace of Aces.

Keep it real

This was a alright battle..

Urban: Didnt like how you structured your verse, it threw the flow off...the vocab was alright.....had some ok punches i thought....you also had some good metas in there, I liked some of those.

Veloci or Ace: You had good structure in your verse, just the second part made it seem stretched out a bit but it was still good...You had the better punches though, Some of those made me laugh....The flow was good as well.

Overall: it was a alright battle...But Veloci/Ace takes this for the better verse overall I thought...He just came harder with the punches. Props to both though.

Vote goes to Veloci/Ace

^thanx for the votes. finish this up.
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k my vote goes to ace for a good strcturea nd good pucnhes and personals

you had the best line in the battle in this one:

Quote:

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Your like a 3 year old coloring outside the lines with wut you're sketchin'
I would tell everyone that ur dope, but that'd only be an "Urban" Legend

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that was aight

urban had an ok flow and shit but it was too elementary and it didnt work with the punches

my vote goes to ace for the better verse and punches

hit up the battle vs mouse b please ...i need one more

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Dis was a very weak battle..urban work on ur structure first..then try to elevate..ace had a descent drop..wid attempts and wordplay and had good flow..had some descent punches..not bad multi's too..Okay battle but Ace got this in my opinion..

V/ Ace
~1~


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rite this battle would of been nice to be honest.....................but urban killed it with that flow....................wich basically lost himn the battle he had an ite verse.........punches coulda bin harder but his flow was non exsistence along with strucutre....................wich lost him this.ace nice verse flow was good punches ok strucuture a lil rusty in parts but you got the win.........not a bad battle both work on structure and harder punches.

make sure you plkz hit this NOW http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117483 thx alot.

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dogg make sure you hit that plz man i took the time..............................

it was a decent battle but ace gets my vote
structure-ace, i could barly read urbans
flow-ace
personals-ace
punches-ace
opener-ace
closer-ace
my vote goes to ace bc his verse was much bbetter than urbans

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how wasnt that a fair vote Axiom
every 1 else votes like that and they dont get their vote took away bitch

DAMN. please explain your votes so they can count.
honestly i think at least one of those^ are explained well
anough. oh well.
finish this plz.

No Votes. :-(

lol. plz vote. leave a link if you want me to return a fair vote on
a battle of yours. thank you.

pz

damn i explained my vote as much as i could soz ace m8 you did win....................plz do me qa favor and hit this up man leave another link honest shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117659 thx dogg and soz bout the vote.

MY VERDICT

Good shit from both of you and surpriseingly a good drop from urban cause bein a newb and all so pretty good allaround but this has to goto ace of aces cause his drop was better.

URBAN: good drop for your level but ur flow sucked personals were half assed u could of done better and no multies no punches pretty weak all ya had was a little vocab goin and long lines.but they dunt win battles 3/10
my favourite line:
"dicks thinkin you could beat me ya prolly yellow like an asian bitch ya just like my former lover who neva took showers ya extinct (ex stink) and i'm"

ACE: good shit man pretty good flow nice structure coulda been betta but still good nice punches and attacks good work on vocab. i didnt like your "switch" that was the only thing i didnt like bout your drop but all in all still good. 6/10
my favourite line:
"It amazes me to know how you actually think that you have a chance in this thing
Reminds me of that asian guy on American idol who thot he culd dance and sing"

Flow:ace
Structure:ace
humor:ace
vocab:urb
overall:ace

MY VOTE: Ace Of Aces

ok im gonna redo my vote

ace- had giood punches and personals
the flow was good and it made for easy reading which made ur verse better.
the structure was good and it also made ur verse better. the wordplay was also good and it styrethened ur verse....keeo up the good work...i like the way u battle....keep gwettin better


urban- the punches were ok...nothin really special
the personals were bad becuase i didnt see any.....the punches didnt hit hard at all
i didnt like the flow of ur verse....it made me think about the bars and thats not good
.....elevate....try using personals because it makes ur verse better.....flow was ok and the stucture was ok but not better than ace....elevate and ull get better

v/ace

hope thats explained well enough

Sorry. Your original vote was explained well enough by recent standards.
-Axe