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aiight, I think Cheq Neq came with more intelligent concepts, but he didn't flip a single one of them, i found it very newbish to highlight the ends, when most of them weren't flipped, yet rappin' master didn't come strong on punches either but he didn't look as newbish and had one or two that was flipped, but both could use some work on punches, the flow was taking by a mile by rappin' master along with structure and his rhyme scheme, that was a white wash, so i think rappin' master takes this one marginly.
V/Rappin' Master
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uppin yall come on....
i cant believe this really...
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uppin ppl.......................................#1
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come on ppl. vote on this battle. we need votes!!!
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master=
Master Diminish Ripping, Crying your life when you Wept-Debt,
After I Finished Flipping, Cheq-Neq Has to Get Ya Neq-Cheq'd//
ok bar, not the best play on words tho.
Like Im Meths-Wrecked, He couldn't show off if he Was-Nude,
What he Suggest-Inept,Just Like Where Wolly you Lost-Dude//
like this punch, made me laugh
What I Concoct-Feuds, I got more chance Living for Eternity,
Than you Not To-Lose, After OnePunch Im Giving Emergency//
wack
He got Reality Twisted, Cheq'Neq Is Screwing The Win,
Is this kid Tight Fisted? Nah this dumbfucks Imbuing Nothing//
ok last line
chek-nek =
..This Dude 'Speaks Through His Feet' Similar to 'Soccer Debatin'!!
Ya 'Life'? the 'Doctors Beratin'! cuz chek made yuh 'Embrace yo Stomach' like 'Boxers Recuperatin!!'//1
weak line
...Ya 'Blessed by a Blown Gage'!..when the 'Clips Change ya Views of God' like a 'Jehova Witness's Home Page'!//2
ok,played tho
..Recieve Tips on Ways to get Rob!.. when I 'Seperate ya Pulse' and leave yah 'Body to Part with the Throbs'!!....'Survival'?..Vis'll Stomp *Lottery Tickets in ya Chest*!..make ya *Heart Quit its Day Job*!!..//3
dont like the bar
..Ya Lost 'Money from a Thin Salary'!..when I Pushed yu 'Over Hells Budget' like 'Costly Sin Rallies'!..I'll End your Dreams! so *Theo Ain't Seen Next Season* like a *Cosby Finale*!!//4
bla
..Knives Inserted in ya Spine! leave Marks 'Stiched on the Inside' like 'Fake Shirt Designs'!..Beat 'Work into ya Mind'!--now *Theory Dead on Campus* like *Albert Einstein*!!
nice bar
..Obtain Brutal Beatins from the Bars! when it Knocks ya Teeth in Hard!..//5
wack
lets finish this dam sucka up
...Flames! make ya Feel the Heatin Scars!..till ya *Heart Jumps Out the Back* like *Sealed Greetin Cards*!!//6
rubbish last line
masta had better punches and style of the spit, i really didnt like niq's style of spittin. or his punches
vote = rappin masta
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come on ppl. can u come and vote on dis battle now... dont sleep on it.....
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come on ppl. 2 more votz. i will return da favoue, just leave a link for me
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Oh shit rappin master dawg u got mah vote ur 1st line was killah i liked that u had good word play u defintly deserve this battlew!
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Rappin master: You had a nice flow with sum nice rhymes and a gud wordplay, your structure was gud to flollow and your verse made sense, you had sum nice punches which came thru hard, you had sum personals but I'd like to see more of them.
overall: 12/20
Cheq' Nec: your flow was nice, you had an ok vocabulairy, your punches came thru weak, you hardly had any personals, you need to work on your personals, you had a gud wordplay, your structure was a liitle off
overall: 9/20
overall vote: Rappin' Master
Yo hit this up man : http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114243
