Dev vs OutCome

This is how I see it.

Flow=Dev, I had to give this one to Dev, both had okay flow but Dev's was much easier to read than Out's. Some of Out's line's were just to stretched.

Punches=Dev, he had some funny shit in there, and his punches just hit harder. Out, you had some okay shit, I just didn't think that they hit as hard.

Personals=Tie, I liked both of these verses in the personals catagory, you both had some good personals so it's a tie.

Vocab=Tie, I think you both had some okay vocab, it's not as good as it could have been, but you both had enough vocab to get the job done in this one.

Over all=Dev, you had some good punches and personals, your vocab could have been a bit better but it was still okay, and your flow was good as well. I liked this drop it was a good read and made me laugh a few times, it was a good drop, keep it up.
Out, you had an okay verse, you had some okay punches, and you had some good personals, your vocab was okay but could be improved upon, your flow needs some work mostly in structure because of the stretched lines but over all it was a good verse, keep at it and everything will pull together.

Vote=Dev

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To me a battle consists of two things mainly, and that is flow and punchlines but ofcourse intelligence, wording, vocab, technique and wittiness also come into the equation, so first is the flow and i felt that dev edged this one barely, but his punchlines outshone outcome, there wasn't really any amazing wording nor vocab or wittiness in this battle, i would have say some intelligence did show from both, ofcourse, lol, on the real dev had this through better quality pucnhlines and maintaining a good flow, pz

V/Dev

Ok. . .

OutCome - I Wasn't Feeling Your Verse At All, Too Many Played Lines, Bold Was Annoying. . Only Good Punch That Actually Hit Were The Two Hemisphere Lines, Flow Was OK, Structure Was Fine, Vocab Was Pretty Good IN The First Couple Of Lines But THen You Went Downhill. . Opener Sucked Bad Ones, Wack Masterubation Line Is Played As Fucking Fuck. . Closer Was Bad Too. . Gaaah, Played. . Your Verse Seemed Like A Park For Kids. . I Know You Got Better. . You Had Better Personals Than Dev. . You Win One Catergory. . Woot.

Best :

knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down
A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around
^^^ Nice. . Only Decent Punch You Had. .

Dev - More Creativity, Hella Nice Structure, Flow Was On-Point. . And Here's The Key To This Whole Better. . BETTER PUNCHES. . Permanent Leak Line Is Mad Played But Still A Bit Funny. . Your Closer Was Horrible And Played. . But That's The Only Two Complaints I Have. . Maybe Could've Included More Personals To Match OutCome's, Bu It Was Blind, So No Hate. . 2nd Line Was Nice, How You Flipped His Sig, Good Stuff. . Punches Should Win Battles, Although That's Not THe Case Here Sometimes. . Glad To See People Noticing. .

Best :

And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading
If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing!
^^^ Haha, Nice.

Vote - Dev.

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Quote:

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OutCome
Alright class heres a simple equation, dev plus rap equals… a-bad-situation
So were does he come off? is his affixation hooked and on wack masterbation?
Hes just mad, 24 and still cant find a job - geta mic and isa part time fag
Cant rap an to bad this cats drops enough wack herb shit, to call his crap schwag
Punching with illusion fist, no real hits so i expose you like janets titty
Your not witty, check your sig d your at wits end, and it'sa real pitty
I knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down
A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around
What the fucks an En-gland, that's not what you use to spit
Im expecting a good battle, maybe he'll be usual, and use his pre writs

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Honestly... the structure was a bit off
The BOLD was gay as fuck......
When you bold some of ya verse....
It makes it look like shit..
Ya punches were decent...
Personals were weak.. flow was decent
Overall..........10/20

Quote:

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Dev
So ya excepted the battle… but the OutCome is set
Ya might have planted the ‘seed’… but they’re drowned cos ya wet!
And I approach you with ease… ive got no problem with defeat
but your verse tells me… this kid’s always getting beat!
So, don’t matter what you put in… your never gonna reap
You couldn’t elevate with helium… you’ve got a permanent leak!
And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading
If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing!
OutCome, come-out…. No difference ya still a fag
In or out the closet… still in the dark… wit skillz you wish you had!

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Better....
Punches hit harder than OutCome's
Personals were decent.... some played
A few of the lines were played.. but it happens
Flow was pretty good...
Structure was better than OutCome's also
Overall........13/20


V/Dev
Came a lil harder
Verse looked better
ect...




ILLunatic v.s wordplay