THIS WAS A ARIGHT BATTLE BUT DAFFER NEED TO ELEVATE A LIL BIT.
ILL TOOK IT IN PUNCHES, PERSONALS, FLO AND ALL THAT
VOTE: ILL
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THIS WAS A ARIGHT BATTLE BUT DAFFER NEED TO ELEVATE A LIL BIT.
ILL TOOK IT IN PUNCHES, PERSONALS, FLO AND ALL THAT
VOTE: ILL
HIT THIS UP:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111056
Cause Im attackin ya with a 'mixture of flows' like professional bar tenders
one good line from ill>>>both of u had played out rymes and made your bars too long on every rhyme. but since that one line from ill was the only thing i like outta the two battle he gets my vote
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yah IllConceptz killed it in this rhyme everything went together perfect
Thats not how you vote man. Need a reason why you voted me and why you didnt vote for the other guy... If you could poll it wouldnt count because thats a crappy vote.
Sorry This Aint A Break Down Of The Battle But Its Just To Stright Forward.
Daffer = Seriosly Need To Evevate, Week Verse, Not Really Any Good Punches.
Illconceptz = Nice. You Had Flow Down Ok But It Woz A Bit Patchy In Some Parts. Punches Were Nicely Done And Vocab Woz Tight.
Vote = Illconceptz
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both of these verses... were really played i thought... you guys hav a long way to go... and i think you can do it...
daf - just work on the internal/multi scheme making sure the syllables don't get out of hand and that the words don't lose meaning... then just freshen da punches with some more personal diss
ill - same ish basically, it's hard for me to find much different about what you did and what he did... maybe that's something you should think about when you sit and write...how am i gonna make this standout?
overall i think daff gets a nod just cuz i felt his flow was little more natural albeit played