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Opener - Apathy
Vocab - Gravity
Punches - Apathy
Flow - Gravity
Structure - Apathy
Closer - Apathy
Apathy takes this because he bad harder hittin punches. Also you could tell when his lines ended, with gravity I wasnt sure where it was begininn or where it was endin.
Vote - Apathy
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Pz.
Apathy had gravity all da way ya ready to battle rap me now?
Apathy merked with a real format...
Disses that were directed at his opponent.
He didn't feed.
He utilized some decent wordplay.
Gravity wrote a paragraph, mostly propping himself, threatening various peeps...
Then started directing disses about 3/4 of the way through his verse.
Too late.
That and he blatantly fed.
Weaker verse means he lost.
Peace
Winner: Apathy
Apathy =
Wit' Gravity for a name you'd think dis' cat was "down", but check this...
This clown spits so much hot air he has to wear anvil for a necklace!
ok opener, ok wordplay
I'm a sexist textist, so I don't like to flow against bitches...
I'm convinced that i've seen better structure on styrofoam bridges!
nice punch
Are you religious? Well if not you will be after you read this...
The shit you jot is so played, that you coudn't be saved by Jesus!
umm played
Please just, leave this forum because you can't afford to stay...
Why don't you save your self the trouble and throw your key board away!
its ok, wordplay didnt really work tho
Say, you should practice some breath control,youve' got loose lips...
Couldnt keep apathy out ya' mouth if da script came eqipped wit toothpicks!
blah
You should stick to your job of dickriding or take a permanent vacation...
Yes its affirmative, you and your moms share the same occupation!
ok finisher, i suppose
Gravity =
ya seeking for 'attention' looking for a 'metion' i should av let ya have abit more 'preparation' or even give ya abit of the doctors 'medication' ya see im
doin all this for a good 'cause' to get a crews 'reputation' n now i'll 'pause'.......... n rap again wiyhout 'hesitation' me n my crew are as
complex as a 'hurricane' causing destruction 'strain' n 'pain' for anything that comes in our way ya see ur ma enemy n i fuck up any 'enemy' thats stands
right in front of 'me' ur lyrics are too 'vague' im so convinced im sure ya have got 'lyrical plague' u say ur a 'sexist' 'texist' bt ur nufin but a mother
fuckin 'rapist' yo u should a stepped up ur pace 'abit' coz ur just simply too 'shit' this isnt a game or a race u should a realised that by 'now' its jus
like overgrazing ya letting animals walk all over ya like ur mum shes a 'cow' anyhow i'll take a bow' n leave ya in peace right 'now'
Couldnt break down that, just wernt feelin the style, you also had no punches.
ok this 1 goes to apathy, 1. because he had better punches, 2 better flow throughout the piece 3. btter structure and 4. more word play. no need for a break down apathy takes every catogery. Gravity ya need to work on ya flow and punches.
Vote = Apathy
Apathy/ Your flow was nice, gud rhymes, decent voc..........punchlines: your punches came thru hard with nice lines in there,nice work................I want to see more personals from you, I know you can do it, I saw it already........couple of multis in there.......structure was aight
Gravity/ your wordplay was weak, flow wasn't goin too gud..........your punches were played and they didn't came so hard as Apathy............where r your personals man, need to work on that.........structure was so-so.........elevate a little......
Overall vote: Apathy
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