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.:K:.
little politicle hoe..won't let shit go...fucking joker,
cause face it my lyrics are more cancerus....
.....................than a heavywight smoker.....
not too bad, 6/10
don't even no who you are..if you put out some shit i havn't heard-it,
a wanna be vet with guilty written all over his ass..as the verd-ict,
agen not too bad, 5/10
just like your avy..youre a maybe...but really non-exsitant,
and simular to a man with low sperm count...
.....................your flow is inconsistent...............
lol, nice, 7/10
my verse diserve's a medel..im a thug, if your a rebel,
you aint shit man ive seen harder rock..comeing from a pebble,
wording let u down here, 6/10
you sucked extremes dick so much for your postion...affraid of rejection,
cause rebel gets poll'ed for less than bin laden,
....................standing for election......................
not too bad, 6/10
overall 30/50
DaIllistReBel
Flow is persistent, got most wins from noobs, ur merkings are distant...
He was co-leader of Central.......and so the crew went down in an INSTANT!...
nice personal, 7/10
Ur nothing in my eyes, the loss I'll provide, this sickness is hard to revive...
.:K:. wanted to beat this............but couldn't find pussy in his hardrive!...
wtf, not hardhitting at all, 3/10
Like Schwartzinager being govenor, a win for you is an Impossible Mission...
This guy is definately ahead of the pack.........running away from competition!...
i thought 'Schwartzinager' was governer, any way weak, 4/10
It's hard hittin from the start, the pains been given, constantly inflictin...
"It's a shame I can't type as big as Rebel" I'll leave him adMITTEN...
nah, this didnt wrk, decent attempt, 4/10
He claimed he was ill as Oli, "gimmie some respect" he constantly sobs...
I could teach u math in this battle, but it wouldn't help even the odds...
bad wording weak punch, 4/10
i was generous, although u had a nice opener,
overall 22/50
my vote .:K:.
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thx alot man......................coo...............uppin(2 )...............................pz
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K took this with the "smoker" line, the "pebble" line, and the closer...
Did Rebel fuck up that Schwarzenegger line?
Cuz it isn't impossible, Arnie became governor...I'm lost.
Anyway, ANYTHING MISSION IMPOSSIBLE-ISH IS PLAYED TO DEATH.
Starting to see too many "Central" and "Instant" disses as well...
But, I guess they were fitting, just not very original.
Yet, through all that...
He put out some nice lines...
"Ahead of the pack" was very good and witty.
The "Odds" closer was creative and nice.
But, I just thought Oli had the most quotables.
Even though "heard it/verdict" wasn't one of them...
I did forget to mention that I liked the "inconsistent flow" line from Oli as well.
More quotables, more impact, better punches.
But pretty close, gentlemen.
Peace
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.thx alot man..............................uppin(3)......... ..............pz
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uppin(4)............thx for the votes every1 and feedback.................................pz
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Yeaaaaa thanx for taking the time to read the verses much appreciated. Good battle K btw.
Uppin #4
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Oh about that Schw. line since it was unclear to some. Arnold had no shot of doin well being gov. My point wasn't so much that he is governor, the fact that he wasn't g2 do well gov. was my point. Blaaaaaah w/e a poor attempt at a similie lol.
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^werd noice dogg..............uppin(5)........................ .......pz
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Flow-Tie
Structure-.:K:. had better
Wordplay-Neither
Punches-Tie
Personals-DaIllistRebel
Vocabulary-.:K:. edged it
Originality-DaIllistRebel
Creativity-.:K:.
.:K:.
I've seen you come alot harder before
Your punches were decent.. some what hard hitting
Personals were lacked..... wordplay was ... not really seen
Honestly, i dont think you showed effort...
DaIllistRebel
I haven't really seen anything from you
Your personals were good....
Punches were somewhat ok.. not great
Wordplay was... blah... flow was good.
But.. your punches didn't hit as hard as K's
V/.:K:.
He edged this one..
It was pretty close tho...
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little politicle hoe..won't let shit go...fucking joker,
cause face it my lyrics are more cancerus....
.....................than a heavywight smoker.....
nah
don't even no who you are..if you put out some shit i havn't heard-it,
a wanna be vet with guilty written all over his ass..as the verd-ict,
nope
just like your avy..youre a maybe...but really non-exsitant,
and simular to a man with low sperm count...
.....................your flow is inconsistent...............
cool
my verse diserve's a medel..im a thug, if your a rebel,
you aint shit man ive seen harder rock..comeing from a pebble,
nope
you sucked extremes dick so much for your postion...affraid of rejection,
cause rebel gets poll'ed for less than bin laden,
....................standing for election......................
nope
I've seen you come iller. This was a dissapointing verse.
Flow is persistent, got most wins from noobs, ur merkings are distant...
He was co-leader of Central.......and so the crew went down in an INSTANT!...
cool, even though i used an istan line kinda similar on GaZeeBo
Ur nothing in my eyes, the loss I'll provide, this sickness is hard to revive...
.:K:. wanted to beat this............but couldn't find pussy in his hardrive!...
decent flip on an old concept
Like Schwartzinager being govenor, a win for you is an Impossible Mission...
This guy is definately ahead of the pack.........running away from competition!...
lol, nice
It's hard hittin from the start, the pains been given, constantly inflictin...
"It's a shame I can't type as big as Rebel" I'll leave him adMITTEN...
nope
He claimed he was ill as Oli, "gimmie some respect" he constantly sobs...
I could teach u math in this battle, but it wouldn't help even the odds...
eeeeh, ok i guess
Decent verse. Pretty consistant. Some nice punches. Good job. My vote goes to ill because of better punches and consistantsy.
Please return the favor...i really need votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=111341&page=1
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took this with the "smoker" line, the "pebble" line, and the closer...
Did Rebel fuck up that Schwarzenegger line?
Cuz it isn't impossible, Arnie became governor...I'm lost.
Anyway, ANYTHING MISSION IMPOSSIBLE-ISH IS PLAYED TO DEATH.
Starting to see too many "Central" and "Instant" disses as well...
But, I guess they were fitting, just not very original.
Yet, through all that...
He put out some nice lines...
"Ahead of the pack" was very good and witty.
The "Odds" closer was creative and nice.
But, I just thought Oli had the most quotables.
Even though "heard it/verdict" wasn't one of them...
I did forget to mention that I liked the "inconsistent flow" line from Oli as well.
More quotables, more impact, better punches.
But pretty close, gentlemen.
Peace
K
Did u try?
Lol, u had some ok lines..but i expected far more from u..
DIB
Good opener..so-so from there of..
Vote goes to K for better punches & what Btk said basically.
I would break this down but everything has been said really
