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Renegatorade searchin' for the soul...
sorry brotha you gonna lose this poll...
that was the most pathetic personal I've ever seen.
you try yo ass to run fast...
but we all know you gonna fall on your asssk someone else....
Clifford da big red dawg runnin' through the grass...
why....please tell me why.....blah..garbage
Gnaw on yo bone...
Don't condone...
WHACKNESS
Try and rewind and begin again...
Go back to your pig pen...
Go to bed and sleep it off, bitch!
The End!
I'm at a loss for words...This was garbage...no this was shit on top of garbage...no it was worse. Elevate please for the love of God. Thanks and have a good day
ima pop tihs lyrical hit it ain't gunna freeze/
this shit so eazy it's like shootin the breeze/.
im from p.s.a. were we smoke the treez/
no punches/personlas/metas here at all that were even sumwhat decent
u can't fuck with ne of our mc's/
freezer get burnt ne day by me/
ima murk ur ass u ain't no mc/
Weak as hell
ill blow ur ass up n set u free/
this bitch ain't got no green/
Whack
his whole family poor/
they all freezin there ass off, sleepin on the floor/
ehh whack
ill put u in deep freeze u won't breath with ease/
ittl take a nuke ta make ya rhymes hot/
i know you be dickriden bitch ur jsut caught/
BEST LINE OF THE BATTLE FROM BOTH SIDES> WHOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Still whack as fuck tho
u post ur first verse/
who the fuck could wite worse/
I agree...But yours is whack too so don't talk
Omg this was the worst battle I've ever seen in my life. Fuckin awful. Both of you need to check the Whackness Emergency Center for battle tips. On that note, Renegade wins this cause he had one not shitty punch. Oh and I omly broke down 15 lines cause that was the limit You set. Freeze came simple....for a kindergardener even. Clifford? Dawg...no. But I love you both anyway, and I know you'll improve. Peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337 If you want :)
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ok that fag from iowa he didnt kill me i just tko ed him
but i have to wait for 2 more votes so this shit is gay
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freeza pop murdered this nigga.........and he ain't that nice neither.
all i can say is that renegade sucks, but my advice is elevate BIG TIME. Your verse sounded like somethin a lil kid would say shawty.
Vote-Freeza Pop
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ur just hatin casue i said u suck u dont suck i jsut said lay off da syllinbals
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first off..you suck...and if you wanna go then set a battle up wit me and i will embarass you...shit nigga we can have a banishment match. im that confident.......my vote dide even count anyways, i was just givin an honest opinion and your shit is doo doo garbage. damn set a battle up wit me..............10 lines......bitch nucca
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this battle was kinda wack, but ima go wihgt freeze cuz i felt sum shgit, barely but atleast here shit made sum sense, reagade, i dunno wtf wast thgat but eh work it out elevate a little
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when u look at my poast it's #5 not #3 `
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um ne mods do i ned 5 votes or did i tko
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u didnt post 3-0 knock out in your rules so no mod will close it remember next time to post that............*1*
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o thats yo i didnt know that
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uppin homies i need votes c' mon
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lilrenegade89
ima pop tihs lyrical hit it ain't gunna freeze/
this shit so eazy it's like shootin the breeze/.
metiphore,personal = 2
im from p.s.a. were we smoke the treez/
u can't fuck with ne of our mc's/
-self hype = 0
freezer get burnt ne day by me/
ima murk ur ass u ain't no mc/
-repeat ryhme,-self hype,punch = 1
ill blow ur ass up n set u free/
-structure,punch = 0
Very bad. Sorry but this is what you need to do. You need to add more detail into each line along with a lil complexity, and mix sum punches with your metiphores. Kill the easy ryhme scheme's and don't repeat words at the end of you lines, it's to basic. Work on That. Alot. And don't complain, I don't value second drops.
Overall = 3
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freeza pop
Renegatorade searchin' for the soul...
sorry brotha you gonna lose this poll...
-confusion,punch = 0
you try yo ass to run fast...
but we all know you gonna fall on your asssk someone else....
-stretch,-flo,-wordplay = 0
Clifford da big red dawg runnin' through the grass...
Gnaw on yo bone...
Don't condone...
-vocab,-metiphore = 0
Try and rewind and begin again...
Go back to your pig pen...
Go to bed and sleep it off, bitch!
-flo,metiphore,punch = 1
The absolute worste I have viewed so far. I sure hope I start viewing good battles again. Anyways, You honestly need to just quit. And I'm being nice or atleast trying to be, but let's face it. You have no skill what so ever. I can't even put what you need to improve. Just forget about this site. Work on that.
Overall = 1
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Vote = lilrengade89
this battle was like a basketball game wit hockey scoring
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ok vote for real when u get 100 poasts
