flas vs sylicon

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ok...well sylicon is banned..so Flash should win by DQ

sylicin- Not gonna break down his verse cause he can't benefit from
it seeing as he is banned..

Flash- You came ok.....punches were mostly on target..a few were
played tho..try adding some original concepts to your verse to
inhance your punches...also throw in some personals...multis were ok..
...but try to make them punches as well instead of jus having them there
....Add some wittiness...decent verse

Vote=Flash

Other guy is banned...

Flash wins.

Peace

^Reversed!

Just because the other dude is banned,
doesn't mean that the other guy gets the win.

*Re-open'd*

show 2 ir..sylicon is banned..u get win...
anywho..
i wanna say my opinion...
sylicon lost this..another newb.....no structure....weak...
flash- ur shit was okay..structure was better than in most battles..."voohoo?"?????..lol...ya opener..mad me laugh...but u had st8 punches n ok flow...

even thought sylicon is banned...u did take the win...imam vote cuz im bored...
vote- flash..

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Votes should still be valid even though one battler is banned. - Axiom

ok first of all, vote goes to flash

reason:
flash-better red, ya structure was good, ya flow was good(goes along with structure and wordplay), ya vocab was good, could be better, ya multies- u had a couple aight ones in there. u had an alaround good verse, enough to beat this sorry kat.

sylicon-wow!........u need to elevate quite a bit, ya structure was terrible, ya wordplay was wack, ya vocab flat out sucked, ya multies, had none, and ya verse all together needed some mad work. Just a bit of advice, quit rapping, peace.

vote goes to- flash

flash is a bitch............................................. ..........

flash u ate him alive but sylicon u need a few pointers. one
kamakaazi