Brethren vs. JamesJr.

yo do me a favor and vote on Daffer22 vs Baz187

^^^ no, you wak ass motherfucker .

one-sided battle...an eazy win for brethen....he didnt have 2 try very hard...
james..ur flow waz ok...not thatttttt bad.....but work on that...and make ur punches stronger....add more excitment and vocabulary.....ok for a newb...keep elevating....
brethen- good shyt wit da flow....nice punches....n ok structure....nice vocab.....overall- ur verse waz good....not dat boring....
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punches: brethen- his came harder and were on the point.....(experience)
flow: .....brethen barely.....both gotta work on that....u gotta catch a rhythm....n stay on da topic
strucutre: brethen....he kept hiz verse neat....not all over the place...james- werk on that.......even out the linez....
vote: brethen....no hate ......no d/r.......1
keep elevating-james...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358
^^return da favor......

james jr takes dis,good battle but james puches hit harder just,flow and structure was taken by jamejr too.keep it up both of us.
v/james jr
PLZ RETURN DA FAVA:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110860

got to close this battle......
uping # 1

JamesJr.

ima have to give this one to brethren he was spittin hard on punches anf flo all that shit.

other dude did aight he just need to elevate a lil bit

vote=brethren

hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...03#post1151803

flow-tie
punches-breth
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wordplay-james
personals-breth
creativity-breth
overall-breth

Brethren had the harder punches, he did his homework too. james flow was lil choppy, the punches needed to be better, also work on the creativity as well. vote-breth

fav line breth-

Quote:

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JamesJr. PM's me, "can you beat me please", I accept with open arms,
Leave this battle like cigarettes, close but no cigar,

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..lil choppy, but good punch.

peep my battle in the sig
and return a vote.

Thanks, i'll hit those up later .

Uppin #4, last vote, c'mon, drop a link, I will return the favor

upping for the #3 time

just want to end this........
so I can battle more peeps

James: i was feelin the first 3 lines, if you would've kept it up i'd be sreaming murder.

Bretheren: line one was clean, too nice... the second two what are you thinking? i realize act rhymes with dendropheliac, but c'mon.

James: lines 6-10 i'm lovin em they flow well and they hit hard too

Bretheren:"Rearrange your name, and get a 'mesaj' about this kid bruising himself,
Like this kid was battling himself in the mirror, you're losing yaself,
You asking to die battling me, just stick an axe in your thigh,
You ain't an ass-pirate, then why you got a patch in ya eye?," Yeah they ryhme... and


James:"This bitch is thin.... and brittle" NO, no, no, expunge this line from your mind, you didn't need a filler that bad.

Bretheren:"Ohio?! Alien abducted ass live on a farm, why don't you just offer them crops?," LMAO that's great.

James: closer was ok nothing spectacular, but it worked well

Bretheren: That's how you end it?

It's almost a toss up, if Bretheren had a closer that did something... anything, he'd have it, but i give this to JamesJr. Good job, work on the word play.

What?! ^^^^ .

GOOD SHIT JAMES JR IS DA MAN!!!!!!!!!!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...22#post1155222

up n As I said gotta end this battle

there might be a Round 2

JamesJr.

james has my vote cuz if u say this out loud his seemes to have more to it than brethans did, and
"Rearrange your name, and get a 'mesaj' about this kid bruising himself"
that jus seemes reel childish 2 me

vote = james jr.