uppin again....
my check 1, 2...
_-SyaNidal-_...OUT
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uppin again....
my check 1, 2...
_-SyaNidal-_...OUT
cmon people give us some votes
stop sleeeepin....
_-SyaNidal-_...OUT
{Microphones...} My weapon of Choice...
wtf!? stop sleepin on shit...
start voting... leave a link...
_-SyaNidal-_...OUT
damn, please, people start voting on battles and shit otherwise this site is gonna go to shit....
damn uppin this shit....voting is gettin ridiculous
Uppin for these dudes.
dis was a good topical battle.....
Diverse came with good vocab...and wordplay was nice....structure was basic tho....overall...7/10
SyaNidal came with good vocab...and wordplay was nice.....structure was also very good...overall...8/10
keep it up both of u....
v/SyaNidal
Uppin for these kids.
My Assessment
Synadal: Man this was pretty average dunt think more lines = wins its wat you write not how much, your flow was aight but your spit was wat we all think not wat you specifically think make it deeper more personal pour your heart and soul into this its the only way to proove yourself , your structure aight, vocab basic , imagery none just threw words around make them run rivers of images in ppl's minds make them like extracts out of novels keep at topicals and youll excell right now your average.
Diverse: Another good read very poetic and pretty darn right excellent i felt the deepness of your pice put as DimurgiC has said in my translation dumb it down a bit not too much but not so philosophical unless its to fit the topic at hand still very good liked your multi's and vocab and youve proven that sometimes less is more.
Overall: This was one sided but talent shon through from both writers but excell at your weak points and you will advance and elevate.
My VOTE: Diverse