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Punches: Harlem
Wordplay: Neither
Personals: Harlem
Multis: Neither
Opner: Harlem
Closer: Harlem
Vote - Harlem's Finest
Yo had the most basic verse, no punches, and just barely rhymed everything, Harlem had an overall better verse, better flow.
Kid's elevation status is gathering more dust than Dirt Devil
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Yo Yo Yo was general.. shit coulda been for anyone.. jus a string of random punches.. no flow or build up to speak of.. HF typed for his opponent.. did a lil hwk.. personal punches came consistant an a nice flow to hold it all together.. the opener woulda been enuff coa that was strait up witty.. props to both.. YO YO YO jus do some research on who u battlin in future.
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This battle got re-opened...
Man... uppin.. drop an explained vote.. I'll return the favour...
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..Harlem's obviously one of the better FL battlers..
Every battle is a complete merking..
His punches & personals weren't great but for FL..superb.
Some nice little witty wordplay aswell..
YO YO YO, ur name alrdy ruined ur chances..
& then that verse..completely vanished ur chances..
Harlem's Finest was just better period.
Better punches & personal in form of sometimes dope wordplay.
Just much better then Yo Yo Yo..
HF
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yo yo yo
not really any punches that hit hard, you had one or two decent concepts, but didn't make enough of them.
your struture was basically fucked, wordplay was pretty weak in place,
an a personal or two would go a long way.
harlems finest
you had some nice personals which basically killed the battle off, you had decent punches as well, wordplay was good, format an structure was nice.
harlems finest takes this for a better verse, with punches!!
plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111143
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sorry to break it to you yo yo yo but you got merked from Harlem's finest.............really he's Harlems finest I guess. Anyways back to da topic of why I came here..............to vote Damnitt... well Harlem had some pretty ingenious punchlines and not too big up on any metaphors........da flows and da structure was a lot better than yo yo yo in my opinion also, but both rappers have a weakness. Harlem's weakness.........is he can throw punches and direct but don't often use a lot of metaphors but dats not really to important is it. Yo yo yo is aight..............he kept his own and held it down so i'll give him dat fact right there of course........metaphors were good but didn't have to do with da battle or dissing Harlem.....Yo yo yo jus needs to elevate and go to da Whackness and forum Q's & A's for help on making punchlines..........even though punchlines have to be self thought......... next time read Harlem's profile to have something much better to start off your diss with and use bigger words. Both keep on elevating ya talent and ya skills.
vote=Harlem's finest
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110451
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978
