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Lyric Got this..
Punches-Lyric came harder, ( The Multitalented punch did it for ya)Multi u had some ok humerous stuff ,but lric came cleaner and harder
wordplay- Tie, both used creativity, almost flawless.
Personal-Both had some good personal, I call this pretty much a tie cuz the same amount of cretivity was put into the personals.
flow-Lric got flow cuz multi shit was fucked up cuz of his structure
Structure-Both werent great, but lyrics was a lil bit better then multi's only cuz his rhyme was easier to read
V/Lyric
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V/ Lyric
Lyric came harder... his punches were more advanced and not as basic and Multis....multi didnt have good rhyme scheme and threw more multis then punches. wordplay wasnt bad in this battle...alot was tried but didnt come out good, i say about even give or take. Personals... again..that fits in with the Punches catagory... i think Lyrics personals were more creative and harder hitting, Multis were just aight...lyrics flow was good and multis was meh.. both structures werent the best but Lyrics was more decent....that is why lyric took this battle, his verse just was overall better and contained more of the catagorys needed to make a good, hard hitting verse.
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wow if this aint sum bullshit. . .heh sum1 was slaughtered. . .lyric
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well atleast someone knows......he IS a vet...ive been battlen for a year.....plz someone pay attention to elements.......wordplay...multis......metaphors... ...if your looking for simplicity and below average..vote for lyrics...but my shit has elements.......
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multi had one good verse, but it wasnt a punch really, and the rest of his stuff was played out-"I’m new yet u had to test-me-first? U think I suck, jus check-my-verse
Your death is in these 10 lines, I don’t even need my tek-to-burst"
lyric good finisher, das wut got my vote, -clever- good vocab, but u ddint rhyme wit any of 'em, u rhymed wit da played ones, das only thang i care ta write u need ta work on
vote-lyric
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PUERTORICANELLY VS. CRICKET
sup ma brothas n sistas hook up some votes in this battle the link is on top much thanks to all who vote
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lyric merks.
i liked : Kid was labeled a cripple just got off the list but still invalid...
He learned to type and think...now we call him multitalented...
careful with that ....... structure i dont think u really used it right. basically a verse of average punches but it was still effective because M's verse had this real gay choppy jumpy flow to it when i read it and his punches didnt connect/hit. they were just rhymes. not much of a battle verse..
vote lyric
