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Ya'll were both good, but...
Blaq: Nice personals and punches. But u gotta incorporate more vocab in ur verse. I liked it tho. Keep elevatin'.
Lyric: U had the better personals. U had better vocab, but he took it slightly on punches. I liked ur verse too.
Vote: Lyric
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Personal PUNCHES - I have to choose Lyric with personal punches. He had more personals and the words he choose made sense. The other guy was just rhyming.
FLOW - Both LYTBLAQ and Lyric TIED in the flow department. I like how both verses flowed so I thought this was a tie...
Wordplay - I didnt see much wordplay, but I picked Lyric in this category. The reason I thought his wordplay was superior is because he used a better selection of word and his verse made sense. The other guy seemed just to be rhyming
Structure - TIED Honestly, I thought both verses had some good structure to it...
Multi - N/A -I didnt see any in this battle....
I vote lyric because he had better punches and wordplay..Creativity was about a tie as well....