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damn...this battle was long....wasn't bad but there were a lot of played punches throughout on both sides...till you seemed to have the better punches and flow so my vote goes to you................
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battle was pretty good but long as fuck and da winner of my vote is tilleyedie.
Iceman was decent and was real good but punches, metas, and multis jus wern't strong enough, but structure was cool.
Tilleyedie had decent punches, metas, and jus needed to work on his structure and he'll be straight if he shortens da lines but no big deal still good.
I personally enjoyed dis battle and laughing at both of ya'll diss each other out loud.
Vote=Tilleyedie
vote on my battle below and thanks if you have
AK-mixa vs. Cashvillin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978
uppin this..... i understand feeble....
ok open for votes...
uppin again............
jeez ppl vote
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Yo fuck tilleyedie, wack ass “asian prince”
Lay him out qwik,,stealth style,no prints
He said “asian till eye die”, well now ya dead
Ill drop first so peep it, and leave the thread
Dogg Just leave voice, before I expose you
They say I cant trust you as far as I can throw u
Shit, I had fiorz make this thread, so I can show u
bitch putting Jin in his sig,as close to rap as he’ll ever be
dazasta and 007 both said I was in, so cant you see
dogg your not hot, so stop, “Damn Str8”, your not me
shit, bitch your nothing to ice, just a crumb on the plate
see I already ate the rest, now you no longer wait
Ill disgrace you at a steady rate, merked plenty to date
So ill add you to the list, Tilleyedie, is just a bitch
Throwin lyrical punches, like my mic got fists
And this is just the jist, make you vanish to the mist
Only way youll be hot, is if ya flow was fresh piss
Im always Burnin you up, like I pack acid in my diss
After you lose this battle, it will be as if you didn’t exist
Cus any crew that will want you must be lead by “ditched”
You can’t fuck wit ice, my flow is raw, like ground beef
I’ll put shells in yo jaw, like tacos, and shatter your teeth
Ill sever your style,have you standin devasted, in disbelief
They say “Only the Strong Survive”,but dogg your too weak
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this had some thought into it but didnt really have to much creativity
i give this a 7/10 and you had some good personals but lacked flow
and you also lacked hard hitting punches in a sense of mind k
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i started getting frustrated with all the p.m.s and i.m.s ...
that i said 'fuck it' and and wrote back and replied him ...
im tired of this shit.. r u my stalker pleez say no man ...
ive never been stalked by somthing i can melt, ice?, yo, man ...
illa philly, bitch i'll carolina ya ass, beat ya bye 5 votes ...
i've been waiting for this so when u step up don't choke ...
settle down, or should i say cool off, looks like your leaking ...
didnt you know ice turns to water, so stop trying to beat me ...
mc hammer, 'u cant touch this' im hot, and u might juss melt ...
ill whoop ya ass, stapped wit leather, ill beat you with a belt ...
call me the po-po because when u see me u'll start stashin ...
ill steal da win, slap you dark to light as if u was micheal jackson ...
stop talkin bout guns, your thirteen, u barley have a dick to ride ...
im quick to lie, but still true and im too sick to die your shit to mine ...
im juss ill... u used to roll wit dynasty and still u rep them in ya bio ...
fuck dynasty its the voice from the streetz you can hear for miles ...
the only time you heard the term hustlin was on a video and from coach ...
hell the only time u hear rap is if you get aids talk to bet and boast ...*
deuce one cinco, bitch thinks hes gangsta, but hes just a kid that spits ...
hell how is that original i spit when i was 9.. spoke like yoda 'merked kids i did'...
this bitch has my respect but it doesnt mean hes better cause plainly hes not
after this battle i sed 'good match but i won' and he said lets rematch 'faintly i fought'
too bad at least you did what you could and wishin ya would but it still a loss ...
a win is only great if it was respected and respect is what i muh- fuckin got ...
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this was preetty good ill say 8/10 just barely and nice werdplay
decent overall punches and personals but lacked consistant flow
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vote/tilleye...
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hit this up
in my sig
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Punches: Till
Wordplay: Till
Multis: Till
Personals: Ice
Opener: Ice
Closer: Till
Vote - TillEyeDie
Overall pretty weak battle, Tilleyedie had a better flowing verse, more and better punches.
hell how is that original i spit when i was 9.. spoke like yoda 'merked kids i did'...
Best line
Hit up one of my battles honestly, in my sig
yall forgot hit up the poll both of yall.......
then this shit is over
then i got tru braggin rights
It's closed, get it re-opened, then PM when you do
I got to go with IceMan...He had a structure that left a lot to be desired...i don;t like the three lined stanza's...He ahd some cool punches though...I believe Kryo may have quoted them already...A couple of punches made me laugh.
Till Eye Die...You just came out to simple....You had some good personals going but it was mad basic.....I felt the scenario you tried to put out there but they never ended in anything catchy...Be more creative in your thinking...don't just come out and say it...make it funny. Make it hard.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110795
Your shit is closed but you know who my vote goes to so someone poll it please.
^^ tilleyedie, have this str8tened out, A.S.A.P, good lookin feeble, i knew some votes wasnt right
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votes polled. -feeble
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come vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111229