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this was a great battle homies.......
underrated - structure was good........flow was on target...........vocab was pretty good..........multis were pretty sick..........wordplay was ok...........the way the topic was brought out was tight...........best line in ya verse was ya closer i thought.........
spitacular - ok structure.........flow was good........vocab was tight........multis were ill..........wordplay was ok..........when i saw the topic was net rap, i wasnt really expectin ya point of view, but u drew it out pretty damn nicely........best line in ya shit was by far ya closer........that shit was ill.........
conclusion - this was a tight ass topical battle and much props to ya both, but ima have to say underrated takes this wit flow and the way the topic was brought out, cause i was seein it from dat angle as well........great battle though.......much respect to both cats
VOTE - THEUNDERRATED
yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110019
thanx........
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aight a pretty wide range for this topic...
Spit definately got tha vocab..His was aight..
But Unders verse was on point...
His opener and closer...was better...
He was very creative I thought..andcame with some nice metas
so
v/ Under
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Anon
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aight y'all thanks for the feedback.....this was an good battle.....lets see if we can end it with this upp///i believe this is my third uppin
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its all good i'll use my fourth uppin lookin for some feedback....if you only wanna drop a vote to get a vote and your gonna give a bs vote that'll be takedn away don't waste my time peace......
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Aight since my other vote didn't count....heres another one
Underrated.. was more general in his verse..he was talking
About everyone on tha net as a whole...It had good flow
lil choppy at times..liked tha (gifted, results,& key tapping) lines
Overall good solid verse....
Spit...you kinda of were more personal with your verse...
You based it upon RB and your expierence on it...
You had pretty stretched lines..but had multies in them
For tha most part...So ya flow was aight..nice vocab through out
But you went over tha same concepts a couple times...
close battle I thought...very nice verses
but
v/ UnderRated
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yo this was an ill battle....shit each had very good aspects and shit...had to break it down
Opener - Under
Closer - Under
Vocab - Spit
Metas - Under
Originality - Under
Multis-spit
over all this shit was ill....
vote-Under
yo erybody that voted here check out TheUnderRate and mi battle from earlier...we need some votes
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. read strobes new voting rule.. - Feeble Minded
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uppn for these cats.. hottest FL topical in a while.. deserves to be voted on..
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Yo Under congrats... told you I was feelin yours LOL
here's my fifth uppin to try and finish this off.
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yep still hella slept on i'll use my last up to try to end this drop a vote take the time...read the lines.....you might even like it....word......do it......peace drop links i'm an active voter
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Wise Ways vote was re-polled.
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I don't care if I get DQ'd for uppin this.... I obviously almost lost anyway and this deserves to get voted on.... so good luck TUR
pz
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erry verry nice
spitacular- your verse was nice and cocentrated alot on ow it goes down from begining ( getting started) the maybe ending ( quiting retiring)
the only thing was that you could of cut out the '"" and lil things it made your verse distracting but none the less you did well on writing this
under rated- the problem i only saw with your verse was that you concentrated i thought on only RB, but we are on RB so does it matter? any way yur verse was very nice, i was feeling it from beging to end and the flow was beutiful.I think you also took the vocab but none the less touched the topic very well.
my vote goes to : under rated
