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this has got to go to freeman... the verse had much harder hitting punches, and better concepts... and the flow was smoother... same goes for personals... Yo's your punches lacked, and thats what its all about.... vote=freeman
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iight...
uppin this for the close now....
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uppin this #2...
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Punches: Free
Wordplay: Neither
Multis: Free
Personals: Free
Pretty one-sided battle, plus Yo spent a line DEFENDING himself, what the fuck is that?
Your delirious... repeating the same fuckin word
well... YO YO YO, youve got 2 losses so this'll be your third
Best bar of the battle
Vote - Freeman
uppin this... hmm... can you please give feedback and so on cuz 3 of you who voted, your votes have been taken away...
thanks
uppin... this is my fourth overall... but... a think a get 5 seein as the battle has been opened again?...
so this is uppin #2 after being re-opened...
pz
Free had the better flow, structure and most importantly the punches.
YO needs to elevate, it shoulda been a bit better after 20 minutes.
Vote -Free!
Vote for this!......http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111683
Your delirious... repeating the same fuckin word
well... YO YO YO, youve got 2 losses so this'll be your third
^nice opener good personal...and punch....
im hittin you damn hard... when a dont even really need to
you must be fuckin stupid to accept, cuz a didnt even mislead you
^this is kinda.....weak buti see how you were trying to take it...
you could see my record blatantly... yet you still fuckin accept
maybe you thought youd get respect from the way Free broke ya neck
^this is a good punch.....kinda..broke neck...old but eh...
My verse has left you infected, like poison's been injected
Not even your mother fuckin firewall can keep you protected
^this is aight...computer and rap.....but its still good
Its like your a fuckin echo... three words for everyone
Well, ive got an echo of my own cuz you jus got...
... SONNED SONNED SONNED
^eheh real nice closer.....word nicenice nice....
Listen up this rap battle has gone ass backwards, the main event is on first
I come on like a fetus, the rest of yo all are afterbirth
^this is interesting wordplay...an ok punch...stretched though....
Yea ive lost twice i dont care nothin stops me
I still talk smack and back it up, like Muhammad Ali
^I think i heard this one before......didn't like it then either...
You acceptin ma challenge nigga, think twice like pulling a trigga, im a guy wid a figure
You dont even stand a chance, go call yourself a ambulance, ILLbeat u alive go talk to a grave digga,
^multied yes.....stretched...yes....weak vocab.....yes.....
You accepted this battle Ex-pect-ing a win, but instead I'm Dis-respect-ing your chin,
If this was Wrest-ling you'd Already Be Pinned, You can call this Science class cause I'm Di-sect-ing this Kid
^this was actually a good line....i guess...multied NO DASHES...herb strucutre....
call me a mathematician,first shot KO like im comin with the one hitter quitter
your rhymes wouldnt shine even if they were covered with glitter
^meh....a fine closer butnot enough effort this time for the win....
Winner freeman.....hit this up dope topical against deacon...pz...oh i can't poll says polls are closed get my shit polled though in I.R. follow links return favos peace....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111620
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free man had a few hard hitting punches, nothing to special but they hit,
yo yo yo, had punches but they didn't really connect,
freemans structure, was good, yo yo yo still has a newb structure, with stretched lines,
yo yo yo, probably took the multies in this, freeman had few if any.
votefreeman
better verse, capable of winning a battle, whlst yo yo yo didn't come hard enough
uppin #3...
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vote go to freeeman......merkd this kat overall....yoyoyo work on your style,flow,strucutre....and especially punches elevate!
free you came decent ...attempted personals....flowed well...punches were there...vocab ehh....metas ok...wordplay good....14/20
yoyoyo not to good a verse but not bad....your punches hitting hard lacked....personals were attempted but hardly....flow was decent....wordplay to....witt was ehh... overall not bad 10/20
vote - free
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