.:FiorZ:. vs. skandalz18

uppin this muthafuka......................................... ......................................

skandals just talked about himself 4 his whole verse
fiorz came with much beta punches and flow

"I Prescribe Hit's That Are Disconnectin' Ya Fists's
Cos Your Punches Are Useless' Like Playin' Hockey Without Tha Sticks
Ma "Username" Blows You Out, Cos I "Smoke Herb's" Like-You
Even If You Were A Subway Sandwich, I Still Wouldn't Bite-You (bite his lyrics)"
vote-fiorz

check my battle please
vs outcome (tourney battle)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109556

where hav tha votes gon'?????
it shud b 4-0 on tha poll.................................
wtf is goin on???????????

Fiorz takez it, his structure was indeed fucked but still, his punchez we're a lot better so he didn't really need to do his best... skandalz, elevate 'n keep tryin', and also, don't claim to b black when u r white... ;).
vote - Fiorz

vote on thiz plz... I took the time:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110377

wow

wasnt it supposed to be 10 lines max.... skandalz u spit 22, so im just gon take ya first 10


Skandalz

im given u no props, given u 100 percent disrespect
ill take shots, bullets from my tech get stuck in ya neck
Not hard hittin or complex
ill sqeeze 5 in ya jersey
so ull be looken like Jason Kidd from New Jersey
Very wack....make it more complex and explain more
i know ya boy dont wanna talk
ill blow off his legs so that bitch cant even walk
umm.. hate to say it but as wack as that was it was ya best punch
on the site theres no 1 wacker-then-u
MA Evil im white 2 but im still blacker-then-u
blah...
ill have u hit wit 10 from my mac 11
then 3 wit the tech and the gat is 7
meh..horrible closer


Fiorz

I Prescribe Hit's That Are Disconnectin' Ya Fists's
Cos Your Punches Are Useless' Like Playin' Hockey Without Tha Sticks
Decent opening, actualy you coulda won this battle just wit this alone
Ma "Username" Blows You Out, Cos I "Smoke Herb's" Like-You
Even If You Were A Subway Sandwich, I Still Wouldn't Bite-You (bite his lyrics)
blah.. not the greatest
Givin Me Shit Sayin' I Aint Worth Ya Time
I Burn Ya Rhymes Like An "Iron" Cos Im "Creasin'" At Ya Lines (creasin/laughin)
[B]so-so[/B}
U Jus' A Wannabe Newbee, A Key Pushin' Geek
You Aint Ever Held A Mic, Your Career Jus Aint Meant To Be
not really a hard punch
Sit Back In Ya Seat, Dont Step To Me Or Your Gonna Regret
Cos I've Put Down More Cats Than A Motherfukin Vet (Vet/Animal Surgeon)
ok closer

Overall - you both need some elevation but Fiorz clearly took this battle wit eas

uppin.......mods.....sort this shit out ffs..............
4 people have poll voted but it only says 2-0...???

cum on people.........jus cum n vote on this battle........ya know ya want 2........lol

uppin#4........................
cummon people..............stop sleepin'

uppin uppin uppin

aight aight very 1sided battle.........Fiorz took this1,he had beta flow,opener,closer,punches,enjoyment. his verse was alot beta and he had a beta flow.
Skandalz ur shit was aight but u didnt diss fiorz enuf,bcus u were 2 busy talkin about urself!ur flow was all ova da place, but sum of ur lines were good.

Vote:- Fiorz

Idnt drop ma link so ican u hit me dis up please!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109923

This battle was alright, but...

Skandalz: Ur verse was wack. U didn't really rhyme, u had indirect punches, and ur wordplay was nothin' special. U gotta hit harder or ur not gonna take wins. Also a little too much self-glorification. Ur flow was garbage and half the time u didn't rhyme. Keep elevatin'.

Fiorz: Your verse was all around good. I liked ur punches, ur wordplay, and ur personals. U basically hit harder and better. Even ur flow was better. U were more consistent than he was. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: .:FiorZ:.

mmmm skandalz....I didnt really see any ryhthm....just kind of rambling on.......

fiorz-your punches weren't exactly "hard" but the flow was OK

Both need to elevate...

Vote=Fiorz

yo ite read both and saw this was 1 sided.....to fiorz,
his shit was alot nicer....nice punches(cuda bin harder)...nicer
structure so therefore he had a better flow,
nice verse man keep that up,
skand your shit was wak to elemenntary...no real punches,
wak strucure and lil chopy etempts at punches,
read sme good battles man and elavte..............

............................fiorz plz return the favor with this tourny battle....honest votye http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109550 thx........pz