~ lyrical-murder -v- D.liver.e ~

uppin this shit... plz drop a vote 'n link with your battlez or whatever.. just vote already and get this shit over with!

last up... drop some fucking votez....................

d.liver nice verse, good flow and punches
lm ur verse was good 2,
it was a close battle but im gonna have to go with d.live
vote--d.liver

vs outcome (tourney battle)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109556

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thxz 4 votin but plz hit it up on the poll... thxz...... more votez plz...

uppin........leave links with your battlez..........

plz drop some votez so we can close thiz shit................

uppin............................................. .

Shit I wrote a novel and the shit got erased. Anyway
Lyrical- Your lines were a bit too stretched and that messed the floe up. You came too basic, and with too much filler. Try and be more creative with your punches, personals, and metas. Also try not to be repetative in ya words, ya used 'slugs' twice and it still sounded bad even if was only twice. Keep elevatin girl, ya get there soon. Check out Whackness Emergency Center for good battle tips and also check some battles in LLL.

D.liver.E- Good verse...kinda basic but ya did throw some good punches. Get rid of the / shit after your bars. Some good metas too, try and be more creative with ya punches, personals, and metas..some were close to bein over played. Also Stay away from the sex/gay shit as that is played to all hell.

Vote-D.liver.E
For the love of god please drop an honest vote here, bitch has been open forever!!!! thanks :) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513

FUCK THIS IS THE THIRD TIME IM WRITIN THIS SHIT. IF IT DELETES AGAIN SORRY GUYS, BUT NO VOTE!!!!!!!!!!

Ahh ok.
Lyrical- Your lines were a bit too stretched and that effected your flow. Also try and use less filler. You said 'slugs' twice which made ya verse sound very repetative even if it was only twice. Check out Whcakness Emergency Center for good battle tips. Also check out battles in LLL for structure tips and to see dope MCs. Your punches were sort of weak and basic. Try and be creative with yourt punches/personals/metas. Keep at it girl, you'll fo fine.

D.liver.E- You had a good flow and structure, jus take the / out after your bars. They unnecessary. had some good punches and metas, but also you cuold be a liitle more creative. Check out WEC and some elite battles for tips. You have the right idea tho.

Please drop a vote/opinion here guys. Gettin mad slept on! I took the time (3 times) for yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110540

~ Uppin For Tha Last Time I hope, get some votes.............. Peace ~

uppin... drop some votez, leave linkz or whatever, I wanna close thiz, itz been open for like forever...

lyrical you got skills and nice punches. you tried the eminem thang out ya self on blast to take some of his weapons. much love.
the only thing though he didn't use none of them and didn't have ta. he got a nice flow and his punches were solid. personals weren;t that good but he gets the node casue of clartiy and flow.

vote on my battles
saltshaka vs me
puertoricanelly vs me
drinc against me
show luv

what the fuck is he talkin' about? Just another Eminem-dickrider I guess... Fuck off... Uppin' 4 some votez that make sense... and make clear who he/she is votin' on...

uppin......................thiz shitz been open for way 2 long

uppin............................................. .