Telekinetic vs Tek

Appreciate the feedback.. been a long time since someone gave constructive criticism..

uppn.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108596

Hit that up please

Tek ripped this kid in every category.....not that your whack...Just aint on teks level yet...cant poll vote...good battle

Peaceful

yeah uppn this.. wanna get another battle goin.. -followin links-

Tek- NIce Verse, Bad Structure, SHorten Your Lines ANd Youll Be Even Better Then you Are Now. I LIked Your Multies, And your Punches Landed Pretty Hard. NIce Flow, The Multies Kept That up. NIce Verse, Ok Wordplay

Tlekinetic- You Came Weak, NIce Vocab And Wordplay, With Nice Flow And Structure, But Not Great Punches. They Attempt, But Missed. Nice Vocab n Wordplay. And your Flow Prolly Tied With Tek's.

Punches- Tek
FLow- Tek
Wordplay- Telek
Vocab- Telek
SStructure- Telek
Multies- Tek
Opener- Tek
Closer- Telek

I Dunno, Close Battle TO Me, But Tek Took THis Win

Hit This Up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109027

This was an aight battle in my eyes
But in tha mayne essentials Tek got this
His punches were more complex and harder
Tele you came with a nice verse full of metas and wordplay
But tek just got you with punches and personals
Tele prolly got flow.. but thats not enuff

so

V/ Tek

Can you hit this up... Its third page slept on and I'm outta ups....thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108823

Yo, I couldn't poll before... but I already posted my reasons for my vote-tek.. polling now..

Please hit up my battle though. It's 4-2... honest votes.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108266

alright i'll say it like this..props to telekinetic much elevation since i seen him last...nice verse good punches they were witty and hard hitting....you just got a lil outclasses in this one....Tek nice verse really goood wordplay nice punches....some not pretty original......you want some constructive critisim i got some for ya...get rid off any line having to do with his dick .....the fact that he sucks dick....i mean u used them well but a real muthafucker is above shit like that.....Tele you came hard and earned my respect in this battle but tek been doing this for a while and just came even harder.....LOse the bolds i agree with sphere....peace out....