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Shit this was a good battle
but i thought Wise Ways took this wit his metaphors an personals let alone his punches..killed this newb
took it in all categories...shit was heat
Vo-te-WW
Hit both these up Plz...Rite now..just clik em i got heat..
n i want to see if u r down to battle me Wise Wayss peep my Lyrics..an vote..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109487
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109536
can the poll reopened any one who cares if they get a win or not...but hit the lniks up i left honestly like i did on this
Add my poll vote in
yo is our poll messed up?
sum 1 try to vote again and see/ uppin
They aren't registered to vote....
And Iceman... Quit swaying...#1
^^ i wasnt swayin, i aint say nothing to the voters dogg.. uppin
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Flow: Tie
Punch: Wise
Meta: Wise
Structure: Wise
Personal: Wise
Enjoy: Wise
Vote: Wise
breakdown says it all
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109853
hit that up if you aint already
Uppin 4..............................................or maybe 3... cant remember,
VOTES!!!
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Yo this cat wise ways, is prolly older than me, but im sonnin’/
You would think I spit wit a taser, the way my flows stunnin’/
Here to settle this beef once and for all, got tired of runnin/
^this opener is simplistic....your scheme is predictable...you really didn't hit him with an punches here either...
Yo, im on the brink of killin all of suicide inc./
I’ll Blow they brains out, so they cant think/
And leave em on ice, like babies at skate rinks/
^its called filler you might need more prac in Fl before you bust here man...
This crewhopper, got more beef wit dynasty than a triple patty whopper/
,Hes softer than butter like hes betty crocker, im a lyrical jalepeno popper/
Meanin im hot, I put an end to him, so call me iceman the showstopper/
^this had a ok punch in it but the shit just jumped around so much and the last line just sucked.....
Yo You may have beet prophet but I leave you wit lost conscience/
Your names kaos theory and wise ways, Aliases? Stop the nonsense/
^ok personal but everyone knows theyare one in the same...
hes sweeter than the scent of baby powder, like Johnson and johnsons/
he gets Carson to d/r battles, go ahead and turn that down in your responses...
^see how i wrote that last word in there for you with the dots....thats a structure fix cause your shit is fucked....
Called me out like 7 days ago.. Shit.. ya verse must be sweet
Its Heat, Especially after admitting you been writing it all week
^ahhaha nice opener good quote...
Ya rhymes antique.. Ice is throwing punches covered with dust
Plus I already whored you..so you just a lost and forgotten slut
^meh not your best..in fact pretty weak
I'll Eat this emcee.. Fuck it.. I could devour you.. just by nibbling
Ice.. I'll Son ya ass faster than you can say "Prophet's my sibling"
^ooh i like it alot....good personal
You a Top Gun?Shit..I'll Cruise right past you and split ya cabbage
It's like I'm Mel Gibsen.. Tha way Iceman's second best to Maverick
^good wordplay you already got this battle by this line
And For tha first time in History.. you'll actually get merked in text
Iceman187? How dumb can you be? Tha kids reporting his own death
^this is very true this really wasn't a fair battle
Wise Theory just made a break through.. Literally tha Ice went thin
You a Herb? ya green..you reek of wackness..you fit all tha symptoms!
^wow nice ....keep the punches comin man ....
Wtf? I swear this fags retarded.. If I'm not mistaken thats a lame flow
I mean.. damn.. tha fucking dumbass walked straight into my Volcano
^meh your closer was just ok but i felt the middle....
winner ...wise ways...hit this up y'all its a good read and no hate....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110264
completely onesided here
wise takes all categories
flow-ww
structure-ww
punches-ww
creativity-ww
personals-www
along with whatever category i may have missed
ice your shit was played....and the rest was blah
dont take it to heart just being honest
keep spitten though
v-wise ways
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wise ways won all categories in my view and this was a complete merking
i think that ice man has to go and practice more in the front lines or go to WAC to learn more
no hate but wise just killed you
he had every category and his punches were more direct and hit harder
v/ww
hit up the battle in my sig please
LMAO! Wise Ways verse was pure jokes. Verse shouldn't even be explained... but I'm a mod so I have to set an example. Almost every punch by Wise Ways was a hard hitting personal. The whole, "kid reporting his own death", witty. Had me laughing my ass off. IceMan... what can I say. You still spit like a newbie. Half of your verse weren't even punches... "I'll spit now and stop running" garbage. Just like half the other kids, you verse was just words that rhyme.
Vote=Wise Ways.
Vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108919
Yo this cat wise ways, is prolly older than me, but im sonnin’/
You would think I spit wit a taser, the way my flows stunnin’/
Here to settle this beef once and for all, got tired of runnin/
this doesnt contain a punch, pure filler...nothing more
Yo, im on the brink of killin all of suicide inc./
I’ll Blow they brains out, so they cant think/
And leave em on ice, like babies at skate rinks/
Nope
This crewhopper, got more beef wit dynasty than a triple patty whopper/
,Hes softer than butter like hes betty crocker, im a lyrical jalepeno popper/
Meanin im hot, I put an end to him, so call me iceman the showstopper/
wack, wack, wack
Yo You may have beet prophet but I leave you wit lost conscience/
Your names kaos theory and wise ways, Aliases? Stop the nonsense/
hes sweeter than the scent of baby powder, like Johnson and johnsons/
he gets Carson to d/r battles, go ahead and turn that down in your responses/
nah, not feelin' it
Your verse had weird structure, and lacked hard punches and creativity. Not a very good drop
Called me out like 7 days ago.. Shit.. ya verse must be sweet
Its Heat, Especially after admitting you been writing it all week
cool
Ya rhymes antique.. Ice is throwing punches covered with dust
Plus I already whored you..so you just a lost and forgotten slut
nope
I'll Eat this emcee.. Fuck it.. I could devour you.. just by nibbling
Ice.. I'll Son ya ass faster than you can say "Prophet's my sibling"
nope
You a Top Gun?Shit..I'll Cruise right past you and split ya cabbage
It's like I'm Mel Gibsen.. Tha way Iceman's second best to Maverick
eehhh...blah
And For tha first time in History.. you'll actually get merked in text
Iceman187? How dumb can you be? Tha kids reporting his own death
lol, nice
Wise Theory just made a break through.. Literally tha Ice went thin
You a Herb? ya green..you reek of wackness..you fit all tha symptoms!
first line was good the second line was blah
Wtf? I swear this fags retarded.. If I'm not mistaken thats a lame flow
I mean.. damn.. tha fucking dumbass walked straight into my Volcano
wack
You had a few nice punches. Could have been better but you didnt need it
Vote: Wise, for harder punches and creativity
Please drop an honest vote on my battle with GaZeebo
-W1