Solgooberdier V$ KRAKKA T

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punches sol
vocab sol
structure sol
flow sol
metas sol

sol came str8 on all he was suposed to, krakkar just got crumbled up,
n left all soupy.

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My vote goes 2 kracka T cause he had betta punches SOL u need 2 elevate a little on punches and flow and structure it's to choppy and of course Kracka T has a betta verse 2 win but it was pretty even, Vote=Kracka T can ya'll return the favour please since I took time 2 vote of ya'llz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108019

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My verse was directed toward my opponet Krakka t could have wrote that at school. people man, they dont understand what a battle be, mother fucking newbies.

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Krakka T Came hard with some solid punches, I think Solgooberdier came harder at times, but his shit wasn't as well written..
structure- Solgooberdier yer's was kinda wack, you gotta work on that
personals- I think krakka came w/ more creative personals,much cleaner.......
wordplay-it was really a tie , both used equal amounts of creativity in their shit...
flow-Krakka's was cleaner, Solgooberdier yers was iight but i dunno I think krakka jus composed his shit better....
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Yo Yall Watch Me Put This Foo To Bed/
This Fool So Wack I Can Take Him Sittin On My Head//
Not really feeling this opening.. The punch here isnt really directed not that hard of one either
Look At These Lyrically Fine,well Designed Lines Of Mine/
Solgoob You An Alright Dude But Was Born With No Lines Or Even Rymes//
the flow of it could be better, no real punch of meta
Ima Kill This Foo Right After Spittin This 5th Line/
Sol Thinks Im The Only Mc To Merk Him But Soon They'll Be All Kinds//
i was expecting a little more on your follow through.. the setup hadme thinking your next line was gunna be extreamly hard hitting, and it wasnt
U Lil Stupid Wack Goofy Guy Known As A Newbie/
U So Wack Its Blah Just Like What Every One Heres Outta Scooby//
your starting to lose me a little, i think some rewording would have saved this bar.. maybe make it a little more direct with the punchs/
U A Rookie A Mommas Boy That Everyone Probably Calls Pookie/
I Can Kill This Herb Even If I Was To Bust Like Special Officer Doofy//
um.. not really feeling this ending, the follow through had potentual, but your setup isnt a hard hitting one, you lacked some strength with your punchs...

Over all i think you should try directing your verse more twords dissing your opponent, work on the creativity it seemed sorta of rushed and generic.. Your metas are ok, but need a little better guidence when your spitting them... Try going for more punchs than metas though.




Skill wise this battle is like Allen Iverson Vs. Ronald Murray//You need to practise your shit,You heard me//
opening is eh. straight diss i suppose... not much of a metaphor
Your type dont concern me//You must have written in a hurry//
[/b] kind of a filler, follow through could have had more to it[/b]
Was that a battle verse or were you trying to be flirty//This fag ante 17 he's over 30//
ok attemp ok the personal.. Punch wasnt the hardest for setup or follow through
I'd say I'm gonna rip you a new one but you'd probely think I was talking dirty//Your verse only matches par, I'm better like a birdie//
it connects to the other bars well, with a decent punch.. but the follow through could have come harder with the meta punch
How come you think your good, you arent even wordy//and there wont be a rematch cause you arent worthy//
not much of punchs here
Here's a wake up like the blue pill//I'm real ill//
eh, this line could use some rewording, maybe strech it out a little bit, try for a harder direct punch
Your the counterfiet, I'm the real deal//You dont have talent or skill//
not the best as far as punchs go, but direct. Metaphor could have been spit a little better
If you think your hot this will put you on chill//Your nothing this is a daily drill.
ending wasnt to specil.. um wasnt much of a hard hitting punch or metaphor


Over all your verse was straight with punchs, had metaphors in there although they could use a little work.. I wasexpecting to see a little more personal punchs in your verse but it wasnt bad.

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He came with constant punchs, had metaphors with an alright flow.. Krakka t's verse seemed sort of generic and strayed away from directed disses..

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