explicitot vs D.liver.E

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Yo this is how i see it.

Personal - D. Liv
Flow - EX
Multiez - Ex
Wordplay - Ex
Punches - Pretty even.

So Vote Explictot.

Holla Man....

Peace

expliciont??? or however got this one his punches were a lil better, not much but just ebough to clench the battle!!!


nice battle n e wayz peeps

pecae

thnkas playaz
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not a bad battle wish i seen more actual rhymes
"who the fuck iz u man, thinkin u explicit?
u juzt another fag, battle? dun even risk it"
that was a great starter but from there rhymes got a bit weaker

"ok mayne i read ya verse ya probably right mines worse//
still you "DUN" nomatter my verse gun shatter ya first//"
good starter also but keep it up more

i give the battle to explicit better punches and a bit more flow

i need votes on a battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106471

thanks let me no what you think even if you dont have 100 posts but i rather have votes

thnks dawg u gotz to remember to poll too iight
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Gotta go with explicitot on this. His verse was more comlex, clever, and his punches hit harder.
D.Liver.E just came to plain. He got the idea right tho, he just needs to be more clever add some meta's an shit

thanks playa i apreciate the honesty tha realness thats how a vote should b.

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fuck canibus

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D Liver

who the fuck iz u man, thinkin u explicit?
u juzt another fag, battle? dun even risk it
Blah...not a great punch
u claimin' u hot steppin' up to the mic
but u only some wack mc that pre-writes
Pre-writing punches are played as fuck
fuckin' fake ass battler, ya name could b 50 cent
fake as hell, a snitch and u talk shit we dun undastand
Not a very good punch
fuck around, u end up on that sidewalk in a line of chalk
thatz what u get with that talk when u aint shit at all
What talk? ...its text
u on ya knees, cryin' prayin' bitchin' hopin' someone will notice when u speak
but then people walk over u like a doormat and leave footprintz whipin' they feetz
Good punch...but streatched to hell
get outta here dawg, this shit is just straight battlez
u probably better off just realeasin' intrumentalz.
Meh...not a good closer

Liver - work on ya punches and structure, take a visit to WEC and ill help you out there


Ex



ok mayne i read ya verse ya probably right mines worse//
still you "DUN" nomatter my verse gun shatter ya first//
If ya's is worst then why is it gon kill him? dont diss on yaself
cursed~i guess you can it that, you fuckin materialistic fag-rapper//
stead o' disc scratcher u like dick-smacker, go back to suckin dick of gay-crackerz//
Not the greatest punch
see mayne i dont give a fuck, na man//
imma spit n bust crush ya brain somin like the effect of a fryin pan//
Decent...
quit lyin man, so gay you could wear ya fagness in braids//
call it homo-rows n post on the net for sale on e-bay//
Decent Closer

Ex - Work on ya flow..try to keep all ya lines the same length, dont space ya bars and drop the // at the end. Work on ya punches and drop overload wit multis, they dont mean shit/

Overall - Explict took this, weak battle but he actually had 1 or 2 decent punches

Keep elevatin guys...and take a trip to WEC

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