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^^^werd...dis battle waz "itee"
Ur took dis for harder hittiing punches n better flow
both of u had a good structure n had nice punches....but UR's hit harder.....if i culd vote itd go 2 Ur
yo plzeee hit up dis battle.........literally sleepin on it.....thnxx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105843
Under- your opener and closer were hot that shit set u up already, structure was nice, flow was good. not many multis, and metas were alright but some good shit overall. 6/10
Telekinetic-your structure was good also cause it was easy to read and flow with,ya punches were a little played and so were ya personals. if you woulda put a hotter line were you put the vietnam line you woulda had him. Keep elevatin. 5.5/10
Vote Underrated
honest votes only plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105535
heres my breakdown...No hate plz........................
flow:under....both had good flows....
Structure:both...Same size......thats the same size lol...
Punches:some witty punches from under
personals:....hmmm
multis:under had multis...other tech was..nm
overall=under
no hate....
okay here comes the break down ... scale 1-10
The Underated(11-13) | Telekinetic (3-2)
opener: 5.0 | 4.0
closer: 6.0 | 6.0
punches: 6.5 | 7.0
flow: 7.5 | 8.0
structure: 9.0 | 9.0
personals: 7.0 | 7.0
Metas: 7.5 | 7.5
creativity: 7.0 | 7.0
enjoyment: 6.5 | 7.0
Total: 62.0 | 62.5
Uppin for votes
Severin' CitiSinz
"ok first off the orlando line wus whack cauz even tho they lose alot (becauz tmac has to do all the work) people still fill the stands..."
It wasnt meant to say they dont come to the game it means they
sleep in the bleachers while they there like they sleep on Under
And I take it your a orlando magic fan
Also I would like to know if anything is not played an weak to you people. I see people with higher posts an wins using the same style an everything.........ohh but I guess there shits good tho
Alot of you mutha fuckers wouldent know talent if it fucked you in the ass like all these high post people doin
Had to get that shit off my chest sorry if it offended anybody
Had to be said
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Simple terms "VOTE" lol
I acctualy enjoyed this battle good works guys
Underated- you came good man. Some nice shit in there. good punches, flow was oright ..... nice verse 7/10
Tele- also good verse man. Some pucnhees were funny . I liked the closer . and overall you take this battle by a bit 8/10
props to both
can u both return a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105830
this was a pretty simple one, flow, structure, punches, and all other catergories...........................RATED....any questions???
vote=rated
sry misclicked on the vote, it went to tele instead of rated, nothing i can do, but correct it if u can, one
got stuck right in the face by striaght ace and even tried to take on born 2 kill...
^^bad line considerin ace would destroy me let alone shitty born to kill......
fortunatly ur strectched lines and shitty meti4's didnt hurt u that much.....Telekenetic was simply blah, stale, boring......Under took this in punches, flo, and creativity......Tele took the personals' but that was about it....
vote- Under
sombody end this its some close shit..........................................
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Just one more vote people............................................ .........
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