Token Vs. CarsonJetX2

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104588
vote for this illest battle

Warned! No posting links without voting -Token

carsonjet took the win i like the nintendo line
anybody gonna battle me im stuck dont know how to start a battle but i willl rip threw anybody

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Carsonjet
Token's scared^^ notice the sig switch from dis bitch
Tryna be slick?Ima make his Future Bright..jus like Chrits
^^^4/10.... y are u talkin bout chrit?..ok personal

Fuk what fits, Ima quad lip on this *coin-n-watch him spend
I get the kinda message he sends...
Cool he's a mod look^^he can even post a 100 less chek in
^^4/10...made no sense and who cares bout the check-in

He's only force'in rules because of his anal freind The End
Who What and When?...Please..Token, It's only L's i lend.....
^^ 7/10 nice.......

Toke'is like nintendo..He's a classic but can be broke by dust
Come on..look at this git,He kisse's so much ass his lips look rust
^^5/10 first line was dope second was whack


merk'd from dawn till dusk...dis token suck'd more than tummy tucks
^^4/10 didnt really make much sense

Token-20/50......


Token

You couldn't spit fresh facts if you were a backwards tactic
Said you'd win but..
..You had to lay face up on the keyboard just to back it
^^ 5/10 nice......

Fucka chance of winning... Your odds make evens look bad
It's sad.. The only time you could son is by becoming a dad
^^7/10 nice shit

I won't just KO you.. I'll abc.. and 123 you as well
And Laugh my ass off cuz..
..Fucka dell... Dude, you're getting an L!
^^6.5/10 dope

And there's no reversing it, kid.. Bitch all you want
Cuz you won't just need a style switch..
..You'll need a change of font!
^^ 4/10 wasnt feelin it much

Nothin will help you, kid.. You're beyond assistance
Sure you're noticed.. I hope this verse intrigued your exit-sense (existance)

^^ 7.5/10 dope shit props...

Carson- 30/50.....

Token took this battle. He had harder punches and was very creative. Carson took the personals catergory but it was not enough. Toke jus came harder and was mor eoriginal. Nice drops by both
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ok heres the breakdown....No hate please.....

Flow:Carsonjet....His shit was easily readable....none of that but this or but that to let the flow off....u gotta read fast on Tokens to get the flow going.
Structure:carsonJet....Same as i said...The strucutre is small and nice to read. Not to hard on tokens either
Punches:Token...He had some Majorly hard hitting punches like this line.omg....And there's no reversing it, kid.. Bitch all you want
Cuz you won't just need a style switch..
..You'll need a change of font!

Personals:Token...Hard hitting and very strong ...Carson had some majorly hard hitting punches to...But i was feeling more from token.
Multis:Token...Many were seen in his pauses...Like the buts and shitl....who cares the I read fast so yeah.
Overall:goes to token...yeah thats about it ...No hate .....Alright then my vote goes to token...hit my battles up plz.

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Thanks peace