CarsonJet -v- Reflektionz

Both came pretty well and this was an over-all close battle.
Break-Down

Punches - Reflektions, it hink came ahrder with punches it was close but i felt his hit harder and jsut edged this category

Flow - Both were good, i would call it even

Personals - Carson, jsut seemed to be better quality and more of them

Creativity/ Originality - Carson-Jet, mroe creative more unused punches, jsut overall mroe original

Structure - Even


I think this was a close, when i read them at first i thought reflektions had won, cause he had more punches at sight.
But i re-read both verses and carsons seemed to come harder, Reflekt came with MORE punches, but Carsons were mroe cretive, original and had better and mroe well thought out eprsonals...

My Vote = CarsonJet

having a more original and creative verse...i can't poll vote :(
But can you guys vote on this, since i broek it down so well...

pce

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103975

heres the link....

votes be much preciated........

flow-reflek
personals-carson
punches-tie
wordplay-reflek
consistancy-tie
disses-carson

reflektions obviously had the better flow, and he started off with harder shit, i thought he was gonna take it, some creative shit, some weak lines too, which brought your verse down.. carson had some weak lines too, the mirror line and finisher were hot tho, he had a few more personals hit harder with a few more disses, so altho reflek was more complex and fluent.. carson had the heavier hitters which edges him the battle.. reflek pretty nice tho, keep at it vote-carson

actually i think punches an personals are main an i did have personals

read my last 2 lines

often quick to drop this bitch, why'd you want to battle again?
because i won last time..and you've become wacker since then ..


an that
an a few more..but ok

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^^I don't stoop to that.......................................

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Originally posted by Reflektionz
actually i think punches an personals are main an i did have personals

read my last 2 lines

often quick to drop this bitch, why'd you want to battle again?
because i won last time..and you've become wacker since then ..


an that
an a few more..but ok

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stop swaying votes..and get my name out your sig..unless you're going to marry me;)

get my name out yours man..he sudnt of won that battle he got skillz but wueva.....
an r u proposing

roflmfao!!!!..you gay as fuck!!!..I knew you were gay..I knew you were..lmao!!!!...this nigga asked me if I was proposing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reflections wins this battle with great word technique and stand out lines.
The snooker cue ball in the pockets line was the best in the match.
Carson gave a good show but his drop neede to be more creative to win this battle.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103997
Don't make me come back to this thread =)

im not the one with the fukin rya street fighter Sig

fukin bitch

damn,............................................. ............................

ok no hate vote............pretty close battle...heres the breakdown...

flow=both....Yeah pretty much both were easy to read
Structure=both.....same as flow
Personals=both....I just think reflect had more
punches-reflections.....Carson had played punches which is a no no...Some played not a lot
overall-reflections

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CarsonJet--
This kid called out Jet and then set up wit Token?
We both left reflekt like parent's..his record's broken Broken Record
Ok..nice concept..original..Ok opener
This won't stay open, reflektionz? take another look
Your only 5 and 1 because u battled 5 more rook's
Basic concept..'played'..cud've done more with this..
Forget input...it's like Socom on 56k..He froze-n-shook
Newbie crook, like u took a chapter from Borntokill's book
Screw the similie..nice personal..
He's defintion of status mis-placement..Flekt don't belong
Look in the mirror son...the bay-town rep's men wearin thongs
[B]Again cud've done more with it, Ok punch.
Battlin vets...It's like u want 2004 jus to mean "wins no more"
hardcore?...ur names only reflektionz cus u clean my floor
[B]..Nice..good closer.. nothin great but still.

Overall: Good verse..some nice, simple wordplay.
Nice work on the personals.. work on creativity though..
Sometimes in there..i've seen before.

Reflektionz--
If you wish to slaughter foes, this is shit you outta know..
Jet started text cuz he heard himself over audio..
Cud use a little rewordin.. but still nice..ok opener
because he spits inaudible, he's not what he claims to be ..
so i'll put carson in a headlock and throw away the key ..
No real punch here..lame concept..average filler here
come on Jet, i can't believe my skillz are non sense..
i'll attack with snooker cues and knock your balls into your pockets ..
Good lines..cud up the flow but none the less..nice
spitting some soft shit, and asking me to battle him ..
but i won't stand for it, like when retards make an acronym ..
Could be..but isnt.
now i'll cut off your finger tips, you can tell what to do ..
that's to take them back from me just to help you improve ..
Again filler..its all in wrists to! lol..
often quick to drop this bitch, why'd you want to battle again?
because i won last time..and you've become wacker since then ..
Muah.. ok,ok.. add more complexity
only time ya scriptures are lehtal is when ya pen xplodes.
if you want this to be forever ill i think it's best you don't post..
Would be good, if it wasnt for the fact..he has already posted

Overall: Ok drop, you need to work on wordplay, meta's & what not.. just add more overall complexity.
Also ur verse included to much filler n not enough personals.

Vote: CarsonJet