Detrimental vs. :)

^ i aint finna explain it, if u dont get it dats coo

MODS: will u please erase casualtys vote, because 1)he didnt read the verses i can tell, and 2) ur not allowed to vote like that

peace

uppin fore votes............................................. .................................................. ............................

damn.. the votes are 2 to 1 me can we get this battle over with.. uppin

my 5th up................................................ .................................................. .....

IP: 47CC 0875


Opener- Tie
Structure- Tie
Flow- Tie
Creativity- Smiley
Punches- Smiley
Vocab- Tie
Metas- Tie
Multis- Smiley
Closer - Smiley

Vote- Smiley

Best bar
you've probably had a dick in EACH JAW
cuz all you do is reach in GEEKS DRAWS
your damn mouths like "pac man" cuz all it does is consume and EAT BALLS

Street, your verse was good, but Smiley's was just better.

ahem...

UPPIN THIS AND BREAK DOWN UR FUCKING VOTES SO U CAN PROVE U READ THE VERSES VOTES LIKE ^^^THAT ARE NOT ALLOWED

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I'm not gonna bitch about it, it's a vote, I'll let Smiley deal with that, but every vote against you so far, you've complained.

read the rules for voting and don't come back in this thread...

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Originally posted by Brethren
I'm not gonna bitch about it, it's a vote, I'll let Smiley deal with that, but every vote against you so far, you've complained.

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i know man stop complaining dog.. if you lose this battle just shut your fuckin mouth

breakdown-

structure-d
punches-d
flow-tie
multis-smiley
metas-tie
wordplay-d
overall-d

this was close but that was n honest vote there gud shit by both...props to ya....pz

will ya hit the poll smiley on my battle!

for shame you guys are voting on :) He did ok...But bunch of dick riders need uppin for a vote on your battle...lamos....LOL Ok this is the way i put it....

Streetfames:
Had multis..Good closer...ok opener...Could have been better...Flow was on......Punches were good enough to rip the :)face. Personals were ok also...could have been better though.And ill put up a A+ for him.

:) verse: Ok mutlis a lot...But u lost ur flow cuz of the structure...I the bold hurt my eyes....your complex killed this...Next time take the bold off and u might win.,..But anyhow...Punches were ok...But weak....Next thing...personals...Came out alright...But still no cookie.

Overall my vote goes to street fame...Stop voting on people that have many posts and stop dickryding them. SO u can get votes to.

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Originally posted by :)
damn.. the votes are 2 to 1 me can we get this battle over with.. uppin

my 5th up................................................ .................................................. .....

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stop swaing votes and messing with peoples minds...u can get dqed for that...Just a little warning

damn uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ............................

ok smiley was ok but very newbish and played...
the bold has got to go..and the structure was way off
lines should be as even as possible...
u mentioned something about a crew and unless i completly missed it..i dont think he is in a crew...
seemd prewritn ............i could e wrong but it def...seemed prewritin..

street fame...
had better structure..was easier to read..
some played punches but some nice original punches as well
welll.......not played..maybe i just wasnt feelin some of your lines as much...
that first couple of lines was pretty good and is really what took it for me...

therefore
poll vote=street fame
seemed quite obvious to me

heres the breakdown...

FLow=Both...I cant say who had the best but both were on.
Structure=Streetfame...His shit was very readable.
Complex=streetfame...^same
Punches=this was a toughy..i have to go with streetfame...Cuz he had more punches and your punches seemed ready to go...Must have already been written
Personals=LoL....streetfame....LOL yeah thats about the same ^
overall vote=street...No hate...

these votes have to be dick ridding votes.. since when have niggas voted on battles that are in the 2nd page