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Yo, this was an allright battle,
Ocanti: Better than last time, but you still need to elevate. Your verse was just decent, but your punches sucked. Verse just completley took you on wordplay and vocab.
Verse: Your's was pretty good, but you could elevate too. The whole second half was dumping, and that's good, but it kinda seemed like you were sayin' the same thing over and over. And, it might help to try and find out the gender if you can.
Vote: Verse
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Oh and by the way, Verse, maybe I'm missin' somethin', but where does this rhyme?
{This faggot couldn’t pack heat if he set the contents of his Samsonite on fire}
It seems like it was just smacked in the middle of the rhyme.
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vers just murked that biotch
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