Tactical v. Squall

aite battle
squab or wuteva ya name is..streched lines wastn feelin it
not bad punhces but a lil newbish

tactical took this battle..he had better wordplay..
but nuthin speacail..nice rec..but u shud up ya competeion..

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Last uppin, please don't sleep on this battle you............................................... .................................................. .....

flow-not availible in text
structure-tie
vocab-squall
multis-squall
metas-tie
wordplay-tactical
punches-tactical
personals-tactical

overall-tactical

tactical was a bit harder than squall.He brought some goodshit to the table

Tactical took this he had some funny punches n i like funny verse
altho squall had the 50 line that had me rollin but ive heard it alot...
Tactical had nice flow, structure, n punches... a few personals form each of you Squall took the multis n wordplay but i thoink tactical pulled this one off....

My VOte-Tactical.... Tactical when u voted on me n agony battle you didnt poll....
all yall return da favour...... ThanX....
Peac3_______________-------------------------_________.............

prick~dont u get tired of suckin the same bithces ~dick~//1st
hes a ~trick~, only way he beats me is by his dickryding click//
I'll slash his ~wrist~,maybe ~commit~ a ~quick~lick~ from my~fist//2nd
had a fully loaded sniper, he wasted a ~clip~ and still ~missed//

Kid, start cleanin out yer closet and tell us the first man u kissed//3rd
lookah ~this~ he beats me by using a karate ~kick~ ?
I'm ~pissed~ I'll beat this ~chick~ till he no longer exists//4th
bitch, you spittin-n-hitten kids with prewritten ~shit~//

kid you can't ~hold me~ cause I'm spitting strong multis//5th
overflowing with power proving u can't control~ thee//
My flows are as noticeable as fat Joes waste-line//6th
leave u like 50cent and let you taste nine//
leave u like 50cent and let you taste nine//

I’ll spit 5 flaming bars at you that signify my “inferno scriptures”// 7th
I’ll leave you broken and torn like Leonardo Da Vinci pictures//
Its hard to notice his bars cause all he spits “is blanks”//8th
Find the bitch that wrote your lines and send him a “quick thanks”//


alote of wordplay good pounches not stronge enough

tact verse

Shit, I can tell you got problems but battlin me aint your solution
Elevate to positive numbers theres ya New Years Resolution
Dawg you call yourself Squall, man what kind a fuckin name is that?
Lets face it man, thats jus as hardcore as a fuckin pink skull cap.
Squalls jus anutha whack emcee reppin the ATL
You musta wished for a loss when ya "spit" in that well
you aint elevatin man, wouldn't respect ya if you was payin
Even if ya bought a caddi your skills wouldn't be "escalading"
Fuckin newbie I jus de-virginized you in the art of losing
Versatile, I'll merk you in any style of your choosing.
I jus fuckin killed ya ass, like piss you aint shit
Dun fuck with me............................dumb Bitch

better overall verse harder pounches better word play multies
better opener
good flow

^^^better overall verse vote goes to TACTICAL^^^

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