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Gazebo straight took this...
I can't believe Jedi used "angle" 3 times in his rhyme scheme.
Why would you do that?
So it'd match ya horrible structure?
Almost every diss you used was played, Jedi.
You've got some promise where vocab is concerned.
And you've got a grasp on what a diss is suppossed to be.
So, you'll improve.
Gazeebo used wordplay, decent punches, and some nice flow to take this.
Peace
Holla back on this...
uppin for the last time ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
gazeebo easily takes this........i know i cant poll vote, but heres my breakdown
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strucutre- gazeebo
vocab- gazeebo
multis- gazeebo
metas- gazeebo
wordplay- gazeebo
punches- gazeebo
personals- gazeebo
overall- gazeebo
lyrical jedi got merked, its easy to see...........
and lyrical i thought u might actually be good wit all them pms u sendin me callin me out.........shit..............
but yo, props to the both of ya, but gazeebo easily takes this.........
gaz won this..
Gaz Came With= Punches, wordplay, vocab, structure. You had ok punches with nice wordplay and decent structure. keep elevatin' and keep winnin'
LJ Came With= NOthing, naw jp. but you got raped. he over powered ur attempts of punches, u had ok wordplay, no vocab and the worse structure. you needa elevate, visit WEC
hit this up with an honest vote, i hit ya'lls up
i need one more to put it out
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