Raz Vs MD_killa

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Originally posted by Raz
-->FreeBasE<-- I battled him because he answer an open callout...If he is stupid enough to answer then hell let him get merked...

Uppin for votes::::: 3-0 my favor
number 2

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its not stupidity... its bordem ... i did this for fun... ha... i always do... i'mma open mic cat... u wanna get on some serious ish... get on me wit some topical's.... then we can see who's the ILLEST...

uppin this... so this can be closed... hell... u can have it dunny.. u win...BLAH... i cam major wack... not even tryin ...

Caesar On3

MD Killa
watch me break you off somthin proper the lyrical doctor
given you a dead female dressed in the prom queens apron//
4/10

i'll murder you bitch like the white chicks in the kill bill/
fuckin you over wit white tip dicks~u'll still say a black man did it//
4/10

the raz~fuck this fake fag i'll put a bullet in his esphogus/
watch'em clap~with a busted rhyme that he swear that was fired up//
5/10/10

lyrically break nigga's neck when i spray with these text~fuck ya midsection/
squeeze ya whole body to lose ya air compression~ like strained errections//
7/10

i'mma me rape this faggot ~ an i won't even ejectulate/
he gotta dickriding ring because all people are shapes//
7/10

some of you shit never evan ryhmed??

overall 27/50



Raz
Dogg this ain't the poetry section, nigga rhyme a word
"i'm just a sick newbie" nah son you the definition of herb
7/10

Your off balance, outta sync and you admit your structure is fuck
1-1 born in December and you the nigga wishin me goodluck?!
6/10

I searched your history, same type of verses, Your raps are cliche
unfinished battles, you can't get a vote, chances are history will repeat today
6/10

Hanging off Nuclear Concepts dicks, shit i knew you had to be nuts
for battling me, and he's a virgin, peep his sig, he never been touched
7/10

From the land of the warriors, oh i get it, you must be the waterboy
I know you wrote a better verse, common please tell me the first was a decoy
7/10


your first punches i was harsh o because you fed of his verse.

overall 34/50



my vote Ragz


plz drop an honest vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101874

This seriously needs vote.... all of them have been d/q'd becuz thay weren't done correctly........

so its 1-0 plz get this over with........

hey...i voted on ur battle so would u plz drop an honest vote on mine plz............count dis as a free uppin for ya.

Need this over with Plz end this shit...........

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Hm, i voted on this one already. But i didn't do it correctly apparently. So i'll explain the breakdown..

Flow- Raz, this stems from his structure which was ten times better, made the flow more consistent
structure- Raz, his lines were even, no question he won this
personals- Raz, the poem line was so true....
punches- Raz, hit harder becuase he knows how to actaully punch.

That's the breakdown, vote goes to Raz.

Have a mod put my vote in because it won't let me vote right now, thanks............................

2-0 need final votes,.........................


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Ok, Raz murdered this child........heres the breakdown.....

Flow-Raz(cause his structure was on point)
Structure-Raz (flowed well and was prettier)
Personals-Raz (Poetry line)
Punches-Raz(who else?)
Metaphors-Both lacked but Raz
Multies-neither
Vocab-tie
Enjoyability-Raz( easier to decipher)

Drum roll please......the winner was absolute mismatch merking Raz.No hate, good verse Raz...keep elevating MD......

opening - raz............................
flow - raz.........................
punches - raz.........................................
metas - md............................
multis - blah.........................
closing - raz................................
overall - raz...............................

and fuck...md if ya gonna battle make ya shit rhyme

My Vote Goes To Raz..I Feel He Came Out With Better Punchlines And Some OK Personals Throughout His Verse..MD_Killa Aint Have Much Flow In His Verse..Didn't Even Rhyme Alot Of Words..But My Vote Goes To Raz For Better Punchlines And Aight PErsonals.

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Originally posted by Slik Shadow
opening - raz............................
flow - raz.........................
punches - raz.........................................
metas - md............................
multis - blah.........................
closing - raz................................
overall - raz...............................

and fuck...md if ya gonna battle make ya shit rhyme

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dont you hate it when ya alias's dont got 100 posts?

:(

Md killer, you had no structure no flow.. and i didnt feel any punches. Raz demolished you in every aspect. no hate just my vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101794