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This was a good battle but to me the harder hitting punches came from..
My VoTe - Joker..
Heres what took it..
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i diss to extremes, all ya spits are dirty like when nile meets the gulf stream/
ya livin a dream, ya couldn't 'spit clean' by washin ya mouth out with Listerine/
I gotta agree joker took this his verse way better and his punches was stronger.reign's verse was ok u juss need to work on flow ur shit barely rhyme.
Vote:Joker
yo this was a tight ass battle....
opener-j
flow-rm
multis-j
metas-j
personals-none
enjoyability-tie
complexity-rm
closer- j
overall-joker
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a good vote.
-Cprogress
reign man took this, joker just came with a bunch of forced multis.. reign had much better content to rip at his opponent
vote-reign
Joker took this easily in my opinion... Reign Man had good punches... but his structure was so off-base and sorted that most of the seems like it didn't rhyme. I'm samrt enough to be able to see the patterns... but it shouldn't be so much work to follow your verse.
Joker you needed to come harder though... if you had there would have been absolutely no doubt. Especially since you spit last.
reign man
me and wins attract each other like glocks-and-magnets//
while losses cling to this kid by the name of rocco-malice//
nice
i leave ya bones shattered and scattered in a box-of-fragments//
out of all the contestants, how come i got-the-faggot??//
[]b nice concept jus didnt work[/b]
dam! what a way to start-this-is-ill//
u could be a illustrator, and still have no artistic-skill//
same as above, could of been made better
u buggin if u think u gonna win, u-is-loco//
u only got to into rap battles due-to-no-shows in other
websites//
didnt ryhme, wack punch
i got exec's scoutin-my-name, but for u im doubtin-the-fame//
ur not on my level son, u might as well just get outta-the-game//
aiight, not too bad
im up against a scrony-dude, that was born-to-lose//
but ima take his lyrics, and after i beat him, TextBooks guna run the show//
again didnt ryhme, last line had a good concept
i just stopped-in and i mocked-him//
u shoulda not even spit, and got beat the same way u got-in//
pretty creative, if you meant wat i see in the second line
the way i come so hard, yall say im so-erect//
i'll go-wit-techs, and blow-ya-chest//
not a good punch
u spit rhymes but to no-effect//
i got morals, but even if u was my elder i wouldnt show-respect!//
wack
Joker
this kid couldn't drop hot shit if he stocked stoves on his ass/
i just got to laugh... your so easily ripped like tearing wet paper in half/
played a lil, but an aiight opener
Rip out your tongue, teeth and gums to show my verbal-presence/
Laugh-at-ya words and defeat you cos this kids a herb-in-essence/
nice
Smash ya vocal chords on the pavement just to curb-your-cadence/
i put this as the odd line, nice
Mentally throw scalpels at ya head worse then disturbed-patients/
Call this Family Matters the way I hurt ya like perturbed-relations/
nice multi, nice punch
Cut off ya pinky toe section, connect it to ya dick to prove ya length with erections/
Injure ya arm & veins with infections, piss on ya needle when ya make lethal injections/
creative. multies, seems forced
i diss to extremes, all ya spits are dirty like when nile meets the
gulf stream/
ya livin a dream, ya couldn't 'spit clean' by washin ya mouth out with Listerine/
not too bad
reign
fix your structure, an stop usin bars that dont ryhme, you need to hit harder with you punches.
joker
structure needs a lil work, your wordplay needs to be a bit better, an jus keep it up.
overall joker
punches-tie
personals-tie
rhyme-joker
humor-joker
vote joker
I didn't put too many catagories cuz they were basically all ties
very close battle
~peace~
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Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a good vote.
-Cprogress
Punches:Joker
Personals:Joker
Flow:Reign Man
Structure:Reign Man
Multis:Joker
Enjoyment:Joker
My vote goes to tha Joker man.
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a good vote.
-Cprogress
Jokers winnin u gotta b shittin me My main man Reign murked ur ass!Also Reign delete sum messages icant pm u!and also........A'yo Reign*man* u damn write dat want my best shit against Cuthroat i didnt even no he holla'd me out until Mc Aines told me so i had 2 think quick!holla bak. Peace
yeh dizzy dawg dat lil bitch joker aint shit man!!
i just cleared my pm box there now man so u pm me again!!
man u have impressed all our crew wit yer shit in some battles and dawg dont worry bout fat battle with cuthroat man it was ayt but ur battle against dat lil bitch mcaines was off the hook i dunno how dat lil bitch won dawg!!
Yo, I don't know how this shit works, hhhhmmmm
Joker won this, His skills is far beyond reign mans if you look at his other battle wit Payce, Even though you did have played lines Joker, Which I hate, But Reign Man had even more, And hald his shit didn't even rhyme, and the few multis you had were forced more than the coppers, damn.
Vote- Joker (You remind me of Brooklyn, Bash's, Envy NY's style, Am I right?)
Pz.
UPPIN 4 Votes
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punches: reign man
personals: toe
werdplay: reign
flow: joker
vote: reign....no hate....but reign took dis shyt
Vote gone.. Read new rules -Token
okey-o-doke. lets get these votes goin...
Opening:The Reign Man
Punches:Reign Man
Personals:Tied
Multis:The Reign Man
Metaphors:Joker
Vocabulary:The Reign Man -nice job fo sho.
Flow:The Reign Man
Structure:Tied
Closing:Reign Man
Overall: The Reign Man
no hatin. but joker was pretty whacked. he turned me off from his weak ass opener...
ok this battle goes to joker beacuase he hit with hard punches and was getting ill towards the end....joker try to stay away from the emeinem style son that gets old real quick....just come gangsta.....anyway reign man you had a good start but about 3 or 4 of your punches didn't ryhme which really makes it hard to give you much in this battle cause if i ain't vibing with the flow then i gotta struggle through the verse in order to get any punches and they lose there sting....also fix your structure......vote joker...good battle...hit it up.....both....thanx...
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