cRooklynite vs. McProfit

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Can Y'all Vote Please So That We Can Go On To Do More Battles?

We Can Only Do Two Active Battles At Once, The Rules Say.

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crooklynite.......dis iz no hate or d/r vote.....i swear..but i say crooklynite took dis cuz.......
structure: CROOKLYNITE(no doubt)
flow: crooklynite
opener: MC
closer: MC
punches: crook by a lil'
humour: crook
vote: crook..........no hate

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe

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Profit you stuck me on that intelligence perserverance non-rhyme
made your flow choppy
Crooklynite nice punches but you have to elevate with more complex verses... You had the better verse in this battle

Vote Crooklynite

Mc Profit, you gotta find somethin else to rap on. Get some better material from this guy.

Crook, yo you gotta bring the fire more. I know you could bring more than that.

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Profit
Elevate, thats all i got to say..
Im not sayin ur that bad or hatin..
Just tellin u that, u should elevate,
I could go on tellin u to work on punches & personals,
& all those other 'catagories'...But..
truth is, u need to work on ur overall writing skills.
You had a ok verse..nothin special..some OK lines..
Overall Below Average - Ok..

Crooklyn
^ That goes for you to..elevate..
But, u had the better verse & upper hand in punches..
..This time.
You where slightly better then Profit, but slightly..
..Is better to..
so..

vote Crooklyn

1 last vote needed, click here to vote & Return the favour..

Crook-ok flow,punches,vocab, not really consistant,ok wordplay

Profit-better puncches,flow and vocab,more consistant

Vote:Profit

please hit dis up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...65#post1031365

Well
crooklynite had better structure, even with all the //
He took the following catagories
struc
wordplay
flow
personals

Mc Profit took the followin catagories
meta's
multi's
sust

Overall I give my vote to Crook.
Now gentlemen...It is cordial to vote on a man's battle after he took the time to vote on yours.

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe