Originally Posted by Passive
I liked your rhyme scheme, the way it went smoothly from line to line, no glitches. The topic probably the most original/different topic I've seen in from you. You tried a different style, and thats good because it shows diversity and advancement in the art. Your concepts and mentioning of The Great Depression was very unpredictable, but also very needed. Storyline was so unique, I would've never thought you'd drop like this in a while. I'm debating whether I should nominate this for HoF or not. Hmm . .